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 User is Offline toxic tincture   Post Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 11:15 pm
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with downcast eyes

Silent screams no more
I want to be heard.
I used to walk with downcast eyes,
but that never made me learn.

Realization was eminent,
there's more to living than walls and lies.
I lift my head now,
cuz I wanna see the light.

Don't try to wake me up,
cuz this dream is the only love I need.
Family that was there
returns to me in sleep.

With downcast eyes
I never saw what I had, or would.
I won't look down anymore.
There's more to living than trying to fix things that r good.

In the mor...in the morning
I will find that all my life,
I had struggled to see,
because with downcast eyes I was blind.
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 User is Offline Ninja X1   Post Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:56 pm
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Wow,
I just read a lot of your poetry,
And its FRIGGEN AWESOME.
Where the hell do you get a mind like that to produce that kind of poetry O_O
I think you can be a poem writer when your older.
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 User is Offline toxic tincture   Post Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:36 pm
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lol well i am 19 so i am already an adult, but thnx. I am glad u like my work it is how i express my feelings and convey my life.
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