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 User is Offline Mabus   Post Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 6:03 pm
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What I see.

The world is not black and white,
The world is not shades of grey.
The world is not green and blue,
The world is not night and day.

The world is not taste and touch,
The world is not sound and sight.
The world is not greed and envy,
The world is not power and might.

The world is just you and I.
*The world in not everything and nothing
*The world is not what it should be
*What I want most is
*The world to be just you and me

(I kinda lost my train of thought when I was writing this... that's why it ends abruptly)
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 User is Offline Rembrant Heart   Post Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 9:04 pm
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Wow. Sounds like Phylosophics. Even more so if the 'me' had not been added...I liked it. It could be turned it something really nice...
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 User is Offline Mabus   Post Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 1:00 am
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I also put in asterisk's what could be the last stanza if I wanted it to finish with a little more flow....

I changed the last line to make it you and I but even then it is very abrupt... Oh well Rembrant Heart thanks for reading and posting a comment. To bad you seen to have left this forum....
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