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vincent VALENTINE, already define (must read)

this is a poem about vincent that i wrote with my lil sister. enjoy!



strong, handsome features,
glistening red-glared eyes
he transform into magnificient creatures,
he cooler than Sephiroth that's not a surprise

in love with lucrecia
yet he has no chance
he never left her side saying, "see ya!"
this is his sad story of romance:

Why couldn't she see through Hojo and his lies?
All Vincent could do was stand by her side.
Vincent told her, "Lucrecia, I love you..."
he held her hand
but she ran away and cried.
yep, this is true
sinking him even deeper into the deep blue.

After that day,
Lucrecia stayed away,
the experiment of JENOVA cells malfunctioned,
she transformed and ran away cause there's no option
she gave birth, but her son is not by her side,
in a dark cave is where she reside
vincent rushed in screaming, "It's all your fault Hojo! You never trully loved her!"
it's a fact cause he used her
Hojo went into madness
knocked Vincent out
with no remore or sense of sadness
experimented Vincent with many laughs and shouts.

that was his past...
now it is the present,
time flies so fast......
Vincent is still in love with Lucrecia and Hojo isn't...




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i think it should make you sad for vincent...not smiling Razz lol
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already did Razz
btw curi_lingz when will you post the story about that girl? Very Happy
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pretty soon. i'll try because the story is pretty long so i decided to post it little by little whenever i can.
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ok..i know i'm a bit impatient...but that's just because i really want to know the rest of the story Very Happy
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it's cool, it's better when people actually want to read it.


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 User is Offline Shandris   Post Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 2:48 pm
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i like to read other ppls work...especially when its deeply emotional...
and i'm also a very curious person so when i start to read something i definitely want to know the end Razz Very Happy
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same here. i love everything that has deep meanings to it. everyone here is so talented and unique. i can't get enough of chatting and posting comments here. i'm really into it. ^_^


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 User is Offline Shandris   Post Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:00 pm
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lol at first i didn't want to take part in the forum and now i have over 600 posts....i can't help myself lol ppl here are sooo coool lool
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yeah that's how i felt at first cuz i'm not used to these kind of stuff but i admit that it gives you an awesome feeling. it's cool that people can speak their mind and not be ridiculed for it. ^_^


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 User is Offline Shandris   Post Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:23 pm
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you said it
at funender is actually my first real forum talk Laughing
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cool. you know what, it's actually fun multi-tasking! ^_^


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