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Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:27 pm |
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vincent VALENTINE, already define (must read)
this is a poem about vincent that i wrote with my lil sister. enjoy!
strong, handsome features,
glistening red-glared eyes
he transform into magnificient creatures,
he cooler than Sephiroth that's not a surprise
in love with lucrecia
yet he has no chance
he never left her side saying, "see ya!"
this is his sad story of romance:
Why couldn't she see through Hojo and his lies?
All Vincent could do was stand by her side.
Vincent told her, "Lucrecia, I love you..."
he held her hand
but she ran away and cried.
yep, this is true
sinking him even deeper into the deep blue.
After that day,
Lucrecia stayed away,
the experiment of JENOVA cells malfunctioned,
she transformed and ran away cause there's no option
she gave birth, but her son is not by her side,
in a dark cave is where she reside
vincent rushed in screaming, "It's all your fault Hojo! You never trully loved her!"
it's a fact cause he used her
Hojo went into madness
knocked Vincent out
with no remore or sense of sadness
experimented Vincent with many laughs and shouts.
that was his past...
now it is the present,
time flies so fast......
Vincent is still in love with Lucrecia and Hojo isn't...
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life...is meaningless without you by my side...
searching for you, asking for your forgiveness...
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:42 pm |
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:45 pm |
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Hey, it's great! Keep it going like that
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| That may just be because you are the head of the Funender Garden, and I played 2 professor characters, so you seem like my boss now permanently in my mind. XD |
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:46 pm |
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| Cim Trifius wrote: |
Hey, it's great! Keep it going like that  |
i think it should make you sad for vincent...not smiling lol
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:48 pm |
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Look at the votes
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| That may just be because you are the head of the Funender Garden, and I played 2 professor characters, so you seem like my boss now permanently in my mind. XD |
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:51 pm |
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already did
btw curi_lingz when will you post the story about that girl?
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 2:29 pm |
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pretty soon. i'll try because the story is pretty long so i decided to post it little by little whenever i can.
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 2:33 pm |
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ok..i know i'm a bit impatient...but that's just because i really want to know the rest of the story
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 2:45 pm |
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it's cool, it's better when people actually want to read it.
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 2:48 pm |
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i like to read other ppls work...especially when its deeply emotional...
and i'm also a very curious person so when i start to read something i definitely want to know the end
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 2:52 pm |
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same here. i love everything that has deep meanings to it. everyone here is so talented and unique. i can't get enough of chatting and posting comments here. i'm really into it. ^_^
Which FF Character Are You?
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searching for you, asking for your forgiveness...
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:00 pm |
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lol at first i didn't want to take part in the forum and now i have over 600 posts....i can't help myself lol ppl here are sooo coool lool
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:20 pm |
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yeah that's how i felt at first cuz i'm not used to these kind of stuff but i admit that it gives you an awesome feeling. it's cool that people can speak their mind and not be ridiculed for it. ^_^
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:23 pm |
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you said it
at funender is actually my first real forum talk
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:25 pm |
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cool. you know what, it's actually fun multi-tasking! ^_^
Which FF Character Are You?
life...is meaningless without you by my side...
searching for you, asking for your forgiveness...
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