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wish I could name it mother but damn danzig already took that title >.>
Mother why were you never there for me,
Mother why do you always laugh at me,
Mother why do you always say you wish you never had me,
why must you always hate me mother,
I never did nothing wrong,
I never acted up,
I always made good grades mother,
why do you always act like im not your son,
mother why must you always yell at me so,
I never did wrong I swear,
Mother I take care of you even though now your ill,
Even though you were never there for me,
Mother I promise to always be there for you even though you were never there for me,
Now that your ill mother and dont even remember me I guess your wish became true and now im not your son,
But even though you no longer no your baby boy mother i'll still be there,
even though you wernt there for me,
even though you threatend me,
Mother why must you make me cry so,
all I ever wanted was to make you happy mother,
But all I ever get in response is leave me the hell alone why oh why mother am I hated so,
but yah this song is pretty much about how my mother was when I was growing up and what not...
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Wed Aug 19, 2009 1:41 am |
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it's pretty good, as for title maybe umm repeled?
unwanted? rejected? thrown?
just use the sentiment you felt while all that was hapening. or sumthing that explains something about the song. idk, just trying to help altho i'm not that helpful, anyways its really good.
oh and do you by anychance play an instriment?
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visit http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=P9jG-0BNe-s&feature=channel_page
to see how much i suck at guitar! ( guitar was out of tune and i was nervous but usually i am a bit better i think meh)
if the link doesnt work just check my profile on youtube its wirlwindemo ( wirl win demo) |
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Wed Aug 19, 2009 2:43 am |
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guitar and like I told you I used to sing in a screamo band =p and I dont know maybe its best to leave the song as is untitled
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Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:33 pm |
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kool, i wanna start a band wiht you now  lol anyways how good are you at guitar?
and leaving it untitled is probably the best.
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visit http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=P9jG-0BNe-s&feature=channel_page
to see how much i suck at guitar! ( guitar was out of tune and i was nervous but usually i am a bit better i think meh)
if the link doesnt work just check my profile on youtube its wirlwindemo ( wirl win demo) |
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