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Mon Jan 12, 2009 1:21 am |
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These Kids You Call Yours
ok, i am a music producer, so i basically, write music, play it, make it, yeah u get the point.
So, here are some lyrics to my song 'These kids u call yours', its not finished, im still working on it but here goes(tell me wat u think):
Artist: BT and the 5LS
Song: These Kids You Call Yours
Album: Walking off the Deep End
So you think you got this whole system under control
you think you got it ready to go, ready to show
nothing to worry about, you know it all
never really listened
but you know it all
you've been good, you've been dear
but you weren't there
so don't cry when it happens to come
when it happens to you
What you don't know
is that we're here
what you don't know
is that we do care
and when you do know
its too f***ing late
and when its too f***ing late
you go and attack
-CHORUS:
Take your hatred out of me
Give me your every excuse
Show me your every move
Am I just a simple play thing
These kids you call (x7)
These kids you call yours...
ok, well, that was it, well, thats it so far, so tell me wat u think, is it good, bad, ok, i dont care, just hit me up.
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Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:17 am |
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...it's good...but to fully enjoy songs you need the music...
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Thu Jan 29, 2009 12:18 am |
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i actually liked the lyrics but flare is right you need the music too, to fully enjoy it, and i dont know why but the line "you go and attack" sticks out a bit too much i find, but other then that its awsome!
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visit http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=P9jG-0BNe-s&feature=channel_page
to see how much i suck at guitar! ( guitar was out of tune and i was nervous but usually i am a bit better i think meh)
if the link doesnt work just check my profile on youtube its wirlwindemo ( wirl win demo) |
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