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Sun Jun 17, 2007 12:08 pm |
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The best poem I ever wrote?
I ACTUALLY like this one! which is big for me cuz I usually hate everything I write -.- don't be fooled by the name. tell me what you think ^^ (even if its bad)
Wedding bells
She is higher than an Angel
like light to me in utter darkness
I have always been asleep both day and night
seeing nothing eyes closed tight.
How can I understand such beauty?
Scan cause the moon to envy!
I can not dare!
But what if I did?
What if I dared to love you?
What if my foolishness carried me that far?
Would she love me too?
Oh please say yes my shining star!
A love so true would shake the earth!
No being has ever loved cept her and I!
Our love would cause the realms to shatter!
Lightning will be our wedding bells!
Hear them ring carried on the wind!
The moon turns red in her lust of love!
Our blood runs through each other as the tempests rage!
The howling wind our wedding song!
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Lets go dark to see what we find, turn out the lights and start to loose our minds, so you can see its just a matter of time, untill they find you.
Lets go dark and rewind the night, to see what we loose when we close our eyes, the drum beats in time with their cries, it stops when they find you. |
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:53 am |
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wow i am glad to see u r so inspired, it's beautifully written
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:11 pm |
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really? thanx ^^ I guess some people do read in this forum XD wow I was expecting people to be like "It sucks! Never write poetry again!"
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Lets go dark to see what we find, turn out the lights and start to loose our minds, so you can see its just a matter of time, untill they find you.
Lets go dark and rewind the night, to see what we loose when we close our eyes, the drum beats in time with their cries, it stops when they find you. |
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 1:19 pm |
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oh no, no I like it, it's really good. Also it is much happier than the previous poems i have read of urs
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 2:42 pm |
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Yeah -.- I actually have much worse ones than the ones you have read.
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Lets go dark to see what we find, turn out the lights and start to loose our minds, so you can see its just a matter of time, untill they find you.
Lets go dark and rewind the night, to see what we loose when we close our eyes, the drum beats in time with their cries, it stops when they find you. |
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:19 pm |
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i have a really dark poem...its the most emo of all emo poems!
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Broken hearted I stand in the rain. I think and find the pain. For you haunt me and I love it, though at the same time can't help but hate it.
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The mad, the crazy, the one who still owns property rights to my skull when I die, Kintai. |
Heart pained though unbroken. Hurt and lost though never forgotten.
 So what if I'm a crazy overly power monster? You still love me! |
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:25 pm |
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awwww  Is it that one which no one else has read? If it is do not post it here!
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Lets go dark to see what we find, turn out the lights and start to loose our minds, so you can see its just a matter of time, untill they find you.
Lets go dark and rewind the night, to see what we loose when we close our eyes, the drum beats in time with their cries, it stops when they find you. |
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:27 pm |
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no...its a much longer poem then that one...its called the simle word of suicide...
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Broken hearted I stand in the rain. I think and find the pain. For you haunt me and I love it, though at the same time can't help but hate it.
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The mad, the crazy, the one who still owns property rights to my skull when I die, Kintai. |
Heart pained though unbroken. Hurt and lost though never forgotten.
So what if I'm a crazy overly power monster? You still love me! |
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:47 pm |
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simple word of suicide! Its so emo yet I love that poem cuz I know (to some extent) how that feels!
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Lets go dark to see what we find, turn out the lights and start to loose our minds, so you can see its just a matter of time, untill they find you.
Lets go dark and rewind the night, to see what we loose when we close our eyes, the drum beats in time with their cries, it stops when they find you. |
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:53 pm |
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sadly i know how that poem is...i lived it...
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Broken hearted I stand in the rain. I think and find the pain. For you haunt me and I love it, though at the same time can't help but hate it.
| pinataheart wrote: |
The mad, the crazy, the one who still owns property rights to my skull when I die, Kintai. |
Heart pained though unbroken. Hurt and lost though never forgotten.
So what if I'm a crazy overly power monster? You still love me! |
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| Melkor |
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:09 pm |
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yes ... I know ... It makes me cry (litterally) to remember that.
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Lets go dark to see what we find, turn out the lights and start to loose our minds, so you can see its just a matter of time, untill they find you.
Lets go dark and rewind the night, to see what we loose when we close our eyes, the drum beats in time with their cries, it stops when they find you. |
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:22 pm |
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dont be sad love...my poetry has changed alot sence you became mine...
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Broken hearted I stand in the rain. I think and find the pain. For you haunt me and I love it, though at the same time can't help but hate it.
| pinataheart wrote: |
The mad, the crazy, the one who still owns property rights to my skull when I die, Kintai. |
Heart pained though unbroken. Hurt and lost though never forgotten.
So what if I'm a crazy overly power monster? You still love me! |
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Thu Jun 21, 2007 12:58 pm |
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aww u guys r so amazingly awesome together, I am happy for u both
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TOFU JET AWAYYYYY!
92% of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you're one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off
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Sun Jun 24, 2007 11:51 pm |
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| Kintai wrote: |
| dont be sad love...my poetry has changed alot sence you became mine... |
It has?  Even though it doesn't look it ... I am happy.
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Lets go dark to see what we find, turn out the lights and start to loose our minds, so you can see its just a matter of time, untill they find you.
Lets go dark and rewind the night, to see what we loose when we close our eyes, the drum beats in time with their cries, it stops when they find you. |
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Mon Jun 25, 2007 1:02 pm |
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i wish i had the same happiness u guys have, u r both lucky
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TOFU JET AWAYYYYY!
92% of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you're one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off
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