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Sun Jan 08, 2006 12:08 pm |
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well this is a something i made up 2 nights agoits not very good but i thought it would be fun to make a topic where could post songs or poems that they made up well here is one i made up and one of the things im doing this year is trying everything
Shall be done
The Darkness all around me,
On my left, on my right, Everywhere i look,
It completely surrounds me,
But what must be done,
Shall be done,
My memories are fading
Devouriong my mind ,body and soul,
Becoming one with the Darkness
Now becoming whole,
I know what must be done,
So it shall be done,
Well tahst what i made 2 days ago what do you think and does anyone else have peotry or songs they made themselves post them up
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 12:09 pm |
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Hey that poems cool
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 4:44 pm |
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here are my new made rhymes just made them for the craic of it
People say i am a criminal,
because of messages they call subliminal
they are always in my rhymes
they cant count the amount of times
So I’m there in my battle
Against a guy from seattle
I’m layin down a rhyme
never before seen in time
He says that I am guy
So go back hey hey hey
Just look at your gear
Its extremely clear
that you are *
Look at your face
Parents must feel disgrace
Look at you boy
You are like a Barbie toy
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 4:45 pm |
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Tue Jan 10, 2006 2:06 pm |
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i call this one:
I'm not Perfect, and Neither are You
You think you're so godly,
but you're only human.
You've broken bones, unlike me.
You've gotten black eyes, unlike me.
Now who's godly?
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Tue Jan 10, 2006 2:07 pm |
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here are my new made rhymes just made them for the craic of it
People say i am a criminal,
because of messages they call subliminal
they are always in my rhymes
they cant count the amount of times
So I’m there in my battle
Against a guy from seattle
I’m layin down a rhyme
never before seen in time
He says that I am guy
So go back hey hey hey
Just look at your gear
Its extremely clear
that you are *
Look at your face
Parents must feel disgrace
Look at you boy
You are like a Barbie toy |
DARTHS THAT WAS AWESOME
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I dont do the same things as you, but I could.
You play football, I dont, but I could.
You break bones, I dont, but I could.
You dont drink milk, I do, and that's why you break bones and I dont.
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Tue Jan 10, 2006 2:11 pm |
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whaddaya think?
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Wed Jan 11, 2006 9:34 am |
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i like them both they are funny in there own way
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Wed Jan 11, 2006 1:56 pm |
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Wed Jan 11, 2006 2:25 pm |
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hustler's shootin eightball, throwin darts at the wall
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Wed Jan 11, 2006 5:37 pm |
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no offence but from a semi proffessonal rappers pointof view they are excellent..really gd  but the drinkin milk line is a bit..... 
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Wed Jan 11, 2006 6:23 pm |
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One thing I like doing is writing "English" versions of anime and game songs.
What I do is write English lyrics that follow the meaning of the original words, and have the same rhythms of the original words.
Here's an example: Epona's Song from Zelda, as heard on the OST:
"Epona's Song"
Epona, Epona, come out here by me...
As long as I see you out here, I will never shed a tear.
Tell me now, Epona, since you're here with me...
We shall rest here together, and our dreams will grow!
However as wind blows and rain becomes like snow,
As the fire of dawn comes again...
The moon, it is setting now, rising is the sun,
Along with it's bright light, you return...
Epona, Epona, come out here by me...
As long as I see you out here, I will never shed a tear!
Teall me now, Epona, since you're here with me,
Listen please, for I will sing,
The song of this time!
::guitar solo::
Hmm...Hmm....Hmm...
However, as wind blows and blows and rain becomes like snow,
As the time keeps on passing by,
Even when I pass on, my voice will sing for you,
The song of this time!
Hmm...Hmm...Hmm...
As long as I see you out here, I will never shed a tear!
Hmm...Hmm...Hmm...
I will always remember the song of this time!
The song of, this time!
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Thu Jan 12, 2006 2:06 pm |
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i know, but hey, Im wierdgirl, what do you expect? normality?
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Thu Jan 12, 2006 3:04 pm |
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hey i write a new rhyme in my rhymes by white wolf topic...i would appreciate some comments if its possible...pllllz 
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