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Wed Apr 05, 2006 12:47 pm |
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Sad Poem
A poem I wrote when I was a little depressed.
Distant voices
Echoes in the dark.
Leading me nowhere
Lost in the void.
To find my way out
Is my only wish
No light
No hope.
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 2:47 pm |
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It's good...
Just a bit confusing
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 2:53 pm |
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Thus is the nature of abstract writing. You're supposed to derive your own meaning from it.
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And in agreement with your sad poem
She lays in her bed
without a care
a wide smile on her face
Many saw here there
In the bright shining air
but quickly went on with their days
And you can still see her
the light shining on her
as she sleeps in her grave.
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:08 pm |
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Beautiful... Absolutly wonderful...
Poet lauriet.
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:13 pm |
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Meh. (lol)
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:15 pm |
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Hey, that's my line! Let's not get into another rut agian, lol. (You scolded me for using that line, lol.)
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:18 pm |
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What is a line
but something straight
while life is more of a curve
so can you keep something
that has so many turns
and would this cruel containment
make a three letter word yours?
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 6:19 pm |
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I hate you, lol. (Joking.)
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Hahahaha. Dont hate the playa hate the game! 
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in response this is mines:
the unforeseen:
what can define me?
a 9.8 per sec square anatomy
a centrifugal ride that dorve nonstop,
yet i didn't take this ride like a floor ready to be mopped
ending causing confusion, mixed emotions and illusions within me
just thinkin' where do i stand, where is my place?
reaching a point of zero degree space
losing all that belongs to me alone
running around without a trace
raising my voice and tone,
without a sense of purpose within me
i threw myself at the mercy of my mortal enemies or so it seems,
at a speed that cannot be stopped,
it cannot be categorized or rename
causing a big spin, maybe a twirl and a flip with no sense of shame...
Which FF Character Are You?
life...is meaningless without you by my side...
searching for you, asking for your forgiveness...
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