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Thu Sep 02, 2010 9:51 pm
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Reading, Writing..
if any ones any good at reading or writing books or whatever could you take a look at the first chapter of my story.. just give *, edit it if you want to.. just do anything to make it better lol... and to everyone else just read it anyway
i like writing but i am cr@p at it =D
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alright, i guess? Where is it?
Kuro Ryu wrote:
crazed is more controlling in a dominatrix kinda way than an annoying kinda way XD It's like everyone listening is Crazed's b*tch
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If Crazed is my aunt I'm very worried for my sanity...XD
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I find it good to know that Crazed does not believe in rape and yet does believe in the killing of orphans.
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sephere
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 1:08 am
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its linked in my profile
or just in the writers block
and thanks =D much appreciated
R.I.P David lee anniversary was on the 24th. miss you bro
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I choose my life over seph getting a handjob.
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Arc
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:13 am
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will do when i get to that part of the forum XD
and a lot of us read XD
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<from rukie
< from shandy
Aruko wrote:
Though seriously if Im out walking around in the night to ASDA with the pedo/rapist/murderer/psycho of questionable sanity vampy....who do I have to be afraid of? XD
Kuro Ryu wrote:
A warlock? Arc? ... I've heard weirder things about you to be fair actually XD
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Arc's children would be the spawn of satan.....
sephere
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:24 am
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im cr@p at writing lol need help =(
R.I.P David lee anniversary was on the 24th. miss you bro
crazed4now wrote:
I choose my life over seph getting a handjob.
Ultima wrote:
I officially appoint you the Funender Pimp.
Dated the 28/08/2011.
You may put this into your signature. xD
Arc
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:40 am
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well if you arent trying to publish it
as long as you are happy with it
it doesnt matter
XD
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<from rukie
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Aruko wrote:
Though seriously if Im out walking around in the night to ASDA with the pedo/rapist/murderer/psycho of questionable sanity vampy....who do I have to be afraid of? XD
Kuro Ryu wrote:
A warlock? Arc? ... I've heard weirder things about you to be fair actually XD
crazed4now wrote:
Arc's children would be the spawn of satan.....
sephere
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:45 am
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publish it..? cant see that happening lol its only like a page lol =Dx
R.I.P David lee anniversary was on the 24th. miss you bro
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I choose my life over seph getting a handjob.
Ultima wrote:
I officially appoint you the Funender Pimp.
Dated the 28/08/2011.
You may put this into your signature. xD
Arc
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:54 am
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in a book of short stories?XD
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<from rukie
< from shandy
Aruko wrote:
Though seriously if Im out walking around in the night to ASDA with the pedo/rapist/murderer/psycho of questionable sanity vampy....who do I have to be afraid of? XD
Kuro Ryu wrote:
A warlock? Arc? ... I've heard weirder things about you to be fair actually XD
crazed4now wrote:
Arc's children would be the spawn of satan.....
sephere
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:55 am
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im making it up as a go along..? will see how many we get in the end =D its only the start of the story
R.I.P David lee anniversary was on the 24th. miss you bro
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I choose my life over seph getting a handjob.
Ultima wrote:
I officially appoint you the Funender Pimp.
Dated the 28/08/2011.
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Vanya
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:11 pm
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Like I said yesterday, I'm not good at giving constructive Critisism.
Just one thing, though. It's bugging me a bit. I find your chapters a bit short. If you ever did put the story into a published novel, the chapters probably wouldn't even be a full page long. Just my small 2 cents.
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sephere
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:12 pm
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lol i have no chance with publish lol
its cause these boxex only hold 5000 letters.. or summin =Dx
R.I.P David lee anniversary was on the 24th. miss you bro
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I choose my life over seph getting a handjob.
Ultima wrote:
I officially appoint you the Funender Pimp.
Dated the 28/08/2011.
You may put this into your signature. xD
Vanya
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:23 pm
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It seemed to me that you had plenty of room to post more. Especially on the second post.
((Did you get my pm?))
^Thanks Rukie.
^Thanks Rukie.
( •/_\•) Itachi! <3
^Thanks again, Rukie.
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sephere
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:30 pm
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lol i haven't really planned a plot yet.. got a rough idea..
R.I.P David lee anniversary was on the 24th. miss you bro
crazed4now wrote:
I choose my life over seph getting a handjob.
Ultima wrote:
I officially appoint you the Funender Pimp.
Dated the 28/08/2011.
You may put this into your signature. xD
Vanya
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:45 pm
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Just need the reason. If we can get this worked out, you should join RPOL, and the RP. Then you can watch your labor bear fruit.
^Thanks Rukie.
^Thanks Rukie.
( •/_\•) Itachi! <3
^Thanks again, Rukie.
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Yuu and Alma~! <3 (my new DGM, OTP. XD)
sephere
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Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:53 pm
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hehe what is the RPOL....?
R.I.P David lee anniversary was on the 24th. miss you bro
crazed4now wrote:
I choose my life over seph getting a handjob.
Ultima wrote:
I officially appoint you the Funender Pimp.
Dated the 28/08/2011.
You may put this into your signature. xD