Read my songs and tell me if you think their any good.

Ok, I've changed the songs around a bit and I've got a new one.

So, here they are.

First song.

Endless tears.

Yeah you left me with out warning,
Yeah you left me in tears,
Made me cry my heart out,
Tore my whole world in to shreds,
Made me think life wasnt worth living,
You made me cry night and day,
You didn't love me to have left so easily,
Yet I loved you more than anything,
I did everything you told me,
But in turn you just left me,
Sad and crying,
You acted like I had no feelings,
Yet it's appernt I have more feelings than you,
You have no ideal how much you pained me,
Yeah yeah yeah every night and day every second now all I seem to do is cry,
Everyone may see me smiling but my smiles are just illusions hiding the tears deep inside,
Yeah I truly feel life is no longer worth living,
I never cried at any pain,
But when you left me I cried my heart out it seemed,
Yeah yeah yeah broken arm broken jaw cuts all over none of that made me cry but loseing you made me cry so much my eyes turned from black to red,
I cant seem to figure out why life would be as cruel to make the one i love leave for another,
Yeah yeah yeah I shall never love another,
You tore my heart to shreds bleeding me dry,
Yeah yeah constantly asking myself is life truly worth living anymore,?
Oh why oh why did you have to leave me,
I did everything you wanted,
But now you left me for a guy that's just gonna end up cheating on you,
But me I would of sooner killed myself than even think of cheating on you,
I loved you more than anything yet you must of hated me more than anything,
Asking myself was it my fault,?
Did I do some thing wrong to make you leave me blue,?
They say men aint suposed to cry,
Yeah but I cant help but let these tears slide,
Nothing can cheer me up anymore,
I am to far gone from this world,
I might aswell be lifeless,
Emotionless,
Heart broken,
Crying,
Dying deep inside,
I feel like a puppet, with out emotions,
You meant the world to me,
But you had to tear that world away from me,
You left me blue and crying why may I ask,?
Or am I not allowed to ask anything,?
I guess not because you stopped talking to me for good,
Treating me like I was no one like I was just a ghost some thing you cant see,
I'm tired of crying every second of my life since you left me,
But I just cant keep these tears from coming out of my eyes.


Second song.

Numbing the pain.


Numbing the

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goddamn

pain that you left behind,
With a knife I cut myself,
Crimson rivers flow from my veins,
Here I am scars all over,
Yet all I am thinking is hoping your happy with the guy that you left me for,
This pain deep inside hurts worse than any pyiscal pain,
Remembering all your lies,
Just before you dumped me you told me you would never leave me,
Well that must have been a

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fuking

lie
You told me you loved me more than anything,
That must have been another

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goddamned

lie
Well I'm tired of life so I am just going to end the pain for good,
Suicide note written in my blood,
Knife at hand,
Last prayer spoken,
Times a' tickin,
I wish I coulda died in your arms protecting you,
Truly that is any mans dream of dying,
By protecting the one they love,
But instead I die lonely,
Raising the knife to my wrist,
I cut my wrist hearing the flesh tear,
Watching as the blood squirts out of my veins,
Feeling the cold steel hit my wrist joint,
Bringing the knife to my throat I repeat my actions,
Gargeling on my own blood,
Breathing becoms harder,
Feeling the cold steel of the reapers blade resting against my life line,
ready to sever it,
I lay alone in a puddle of my own blood,
Walls painted crimson yeah!,
Life slowly fading away from me,
The reaper severs my life,
Ripping open a portal to hell with his sythe,
He throws my

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damned

soul in to hell,
With the other

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damned

souls getting tourterd by satans demons,
As i fall further and further in to hells flame,
I watch as the reaper marks me off his list,
The next person on his list could be you yeah!