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Here's something I did when I was a little down. I was listening to "Zanarkand" off of the FF X Soundtrack, and this was what came to mind.
On a stage, at my piano, I play a song.
A sad song, of woe and regret.
They applause, but they do not speak.
My melody chokes them,
Their words become lost.
“Why do you play?” they ask.
“Why do you play such a sad song?”
I play because I am sad.
I play because I am angry.
I play to remember.
I play to forget.
I play to feel.
I play to regret.
I play to know
That I am human.
I play to realize
A life is more precious.
And more precious is life itself
Than the entire world.
That is why play.
And so the cycle goes.
On stage, at my piano, I play a song.
A sad song, of woe and regret.
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Thu Feb 02, 2006 8:15 pm |
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i have a sad song stuck in my heart
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Fri Feb 03, 2006 10:55 am |
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I really liked that. good job 
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Fri Feb 03, 2006 11:54 am |
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Thanks. For some reason, if I try too hard to do something, it comes out like crap. But, if I'm emontioal about something, or my personal feelings get into it, words just flow. If you read this while listening to that song, the opening kinda matches up until a point. Creepy, no?
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Fri Feb 03, 2006 12:03 pm |
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Yeah I'm the same way. I can't sit down and make myself write. Or even try to for that matter. I never take more than 10 minutes to write a poem. For the sake of keeping it emotional.
yeah It did match up. I listened to the song while reading.
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Fri Feb 03, 2006 12:07 pm |
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See, everything I do, wheter it's for one of my projects or anything, I alsways have music, and 99.99% of the time, it matches the mood of my peice. Unless it's a really GOOD song, I hafta change it or it'll ruin the mood of the peice and my frame of mind.
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i concur. It is very emotional, but i cant listen, because my cousin is stupid and shoved a cookie in the cd player, and the DVD player too. well, at least she didn't cram a dozen cookies in the VCR, like Buddy the Elf.
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memories are important for poetry
most of the time mine are totaly based on my memories and emotions
and when your mad it comes out roling
out of your mind (wow that's deep )
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Bravo!NIce job edje.Continue like this
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Ooh! I like this! Good poem
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wow this peom is awesome. i got the zanarkan theme in ff X-2 stuck in my head while reading this poem. it really goes.
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