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Mon Apr 30, 2007 9:55 am |
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the vampire
A man in dark from the east
prowels the night for blood to feast
he walks the streets from dusk till dawn
and doesnt even pass a yawn
this man is pale as though hes dead
his body cold from toe to head
his canines long and pearly white
he gives his victims no time to fight
a man came knocking on his door
he came at night to implore
he came and answers tried to find
he tried to unravel the creatures mind
he saw a coffin upon the floor
and found him self pinned to the door
he bared his neck and drank and drank
until to his knees the man had sank
their he knelt begging mercy please
and his clothes the vampire seized
he dragged him up upon his feet
and to his maker went to meet
the were wolf
The blood lust howl across the moors
The villagers run and bar the door
From this creature who lives to kill
He slays the humans with great skill
His fur is matted with blood and gore
His victims brake in his mighty jaw
He stalks the street when the moon is full
His inner beast comes with natures pull
This creatures heart is black and dark
The creature strikes with a fearsome bark
A bullet of silver is the creatures bane
This is allthat will slay this creature arcane
the black knight
his armor of black glints in the moons glow
supposed a gallant warrior from long ago
but now his heart so full of malice and hate
for he who slayed him at th palace gate
this soul thats forced to walk this realm
this soul thats trapped in this old black helm
he rides at night slaying all in his path
any one who comes across him will feel his wrath
he rides a steed of black with eyes of red
through the night this evil creature sped
with his evil master on his back
to return by day to his shack
his sword of silver staind with blood
the hilt imbedded with a diamond stud
this entity forced to stalk the earth till the end of time
he stalks the streets til three times the bell will chime
the love poem
I love you so much
I long for your touch
I wish you were mine
Cause your so divine
You are so sweet
I’ve longed to meet
A girl like you
There’s only a few
I long for your embrace
A look at your pretty face
Cause u look sublime
I think of u all the time
(no unauthorised use of my poems)
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Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:58 pm |
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Did u REALLYmake these up?
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Tue May 01, 2007 10:14 am |
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yh
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Tue May 01, 2007 12:54 pm |
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ooo i didn't know there was a place for poems. I'll have to put some of mine on when i get home.
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TOFU JET AWAYYYYY!
92% of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you're one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off
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Tue May 01, 2007 2:21 pm |
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so what's this thread about? do we just comment on your poems?
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Tue May 01, 2007 3:04 pm |
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yh comment on the poems please
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Tue May 01, 2007 5:47 pm |
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hm... ...I think u should try to make them so that people can actually think of them in different ways...
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Quote of the day: "Evolution has ZERO evidence, otherwise I would have found it by now."
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Wed May 02, 2007 9:49 am |
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what that supposed to mean
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Wed May 02, 2007 2:10 pm |
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kind like those complex poems that can mean almost anything...
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Quote of the day: "Evolution has ZERO evidence, otherwise I would have found it by now."
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Wed May 02, 2007 2:11 pm |
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oh right
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Thu May 03, 2007 2:12 pm |
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don't worry, those take hours to come up with...
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Quote of the day: "Evolution has ZERO evidence, otherwise I would have found it by now."
-MalakaiJ from youtube
Pure gold isn't it?
You are Stern the Destructor (星光の殲滅者): Polite, calm and logical...
...But nevertheless extremely dangerous! |
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Sat Jun 30, 2007 10:54 pm |
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Nice poems, i like the one about the Vampire better though
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