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Sun Dec 13, 2009 3:05 am |
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Pinata's Poems
"If Timing Allows"
In my heart
In my head
But not in my arms
Or in my hands
I think of that and I come
But I'm early
I wait for that and I come
But I'm late
Here I am in the dead of night
Trying to see that lovely sight
Here I will be early tomorrow
Looking
And I know my hope...
My hope looks for me
When my hope is ever free
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Sun Dec 13, 2009 11:14 pm |
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I really like it, I'm not good at criticizing but i can say my favorite lines from it are
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I think of think and I come
But I'm early
I wait for that and I come
But I'm late
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Sun Dec 13, 2009 11:21 pm |
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| slayker wrote: |
I really like it, I'm not good at criticizing but i can say my favorite lines from it are
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Yeah I made a typo in the editing ^_^
It was pretty dry at first from my own opinion so I changed it up. XD
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