| Pieces of me (my poem)
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Sat Jun 30, 2007 12:18 am |
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Pieces of me (my poem)
Sitting on the corner of a street,
Letting the rain fall down on me,
Suddenly i see nothing,
Nothing at all,
I think I am all alone,
But i turn around and see,
A million other faces,
Just like mine,
I realize,
That they are all parts of my past,
Every time i've moved on,
I've left a part of me behind,
I can't move on anymore,
Because i have nothing left in me to leave behind,
I need to put the pieces of me together again.
I open my eyes,
And see the rain,
I smile, stand up, and walk home[/color][/color]
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Sat Jun 30, 2007 10:01 am |
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Wow that is good.you know how to write
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Wed Jul 18, 2007 3:38 pm |
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thank you very much for your input
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Wed Jul 18, 2007 11:45 pm |
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Beautifully written kiddo. Good job 
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u have any more?
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Sun Jul 22, 2007 9:04 pm |
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yes i do, practicly all of my poems are depressing
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Sun Jul 22, 2007 9:44 pm |
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wow awesome poem gots any more
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^Thx for the awesome siggy shiva^ ^.^
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