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Out of Your Mind
The city that was once so proudly standing strong and undefeated by war was now in ruins. Stained in blood from a surprise attack from an unknown force that was the enemy. People were killing themselves knowing that they were going to die by power of the unknown, children ran to hide but didn't make it far before being found and slaughtered by the unknown. The animals of the city ran far away before the attack knowing of it's approaching and ever so quiet presence. Not even the most advanced weaponry could stop it, the smartest minds couldn't acknowledge what it was. What happened to this city or was it the entire world that fell to it's powerful ways.
You came into the city of Ezekial after two months in a deep slumber beneath your home town of Jericho which was already a warzone when you awoke. "This city suffered the same fate as my own home," you thought to yourself "What's going on?" You walk into the smokey, blood-stained air of Ezekial, the smell of rotting flesh and the sounds of ravens "cawing" and eating at the dead corpses. You see a gas mask on the floor, and pick it up immediatelly putting it on to shield yourself from any harmful chemicals in the air. You keep walking closer into the heart of the city.
In the faint and dark distance you here voices of children. Children saying over and over again, "People dying, children crying". "What are children doing in a warzone like this alone?," you think to yourself. From what you've seen this city mustv'e been the first one to taste the power of the unknown. You walk closer to the childrens' sounds, they may be children but you must still be cautious, five more yards and you'll be where the children are. You see silhouettes of three children playing jump rope through the rustic air and dust, walking closer and closer to their location. Your'e finally there and they stop playing to look up at you with blind eyes. No iris or pupil is seen in their liveless eyes, all you see is blood streaming down their eyes, you slowly back away not sure what has happened to these children. "Who or what could do this to children?" As you back away from the children they keep staring at you with those bloody lifeless eyes, they reach out to you as if they want you to hold them or just love them. "These kids are at least three or four.....who could've done this to them......why am I so scared?" The childrens' skin start to turn a grey color as they keep reaching out to you, their skin getting darker and darker with every step you take. "What the hell." They open their mouths as if to cry for help or just to cry, but no sound comes out only dust. You run and your'e not sure what just happened, you see the children chasing after you in the smoke and dust. Their gaining up on you quickly, their running and limping now their making strange moaning sounds as they chase after you. "What the hell is going on?" What were once children playing were now grey, moaning creatures limping in a creepy way as they follow you. You see a cathedral in the distance as you keep running. You see your destination to, hopefully escape the three menaces that were chasing you. Your getting tired, your having difficulty running through, over and around the rubble but you keep running. The three chasers are gaining on you ever so quickly and closely. You only have a little bit mre to run, can you make it? Their right behind you. "Oh no." Almost there.....do you make it or do they get to you before you get to safety?
To be continued......
(Hope you like it so far. I'll right more if you'd like me to)
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Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:57 am |
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its write XD and yeah its a pretty neat story , just need to polish some of the grammar XD
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Fri Jul 20, 2007 11:13 am |
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Thank you. Yeah I do need to polish the grammer.
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Fri Jul 20, 2007 11:14 am |
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=3 its a good story . i want to read more
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Your running to save your life towards the damaged cathedral wondering to yourself, "Will I make it?" They're three feet behind you, reaching out for you. You have nothing to defend yourself with so all you can do is run. Just a little more. Almost there......almost there......
You pushed open the cathedral doors and quickly closed them shut to keep the three chasers out. You fall to your knees catching your breath. You look up to get familiar with your surroundings. The cathedral is large just like any other cathedral would be, but the inside is severley damaged just like the entire city. "Where is everybody?," you say to yourself. You rise to your feet, dusting yourself off. You start to walk through the church looking around for any signs of life but find only destruction, dead bodies flood the floor of the cathedral. The roof of the cathedral looked as if it were RIPPED off, there was no light outside to shine on the inside off the church, the chairs and stands were all destroyed.
You walk over and around the corpses. You walk over to the crumbling alter and see a pile of clothes in front of it. "What is this?," you ask yourself as you approach the clothes. It seems like all you could do was ask questions, but no one was there to answer them for you. You had to try and figure everything out for yourself.....for now. You walk over to the pile of clothing and examine them. A sudden whisper enters your left ear, you turn quickly to see what the source of the whisper was but find nothing. You look around scared and alone. You look up to the sky through the damaged ceiling and notice that it starts turning a strange crimson color. You can't look away because your mezmorized by it's formation your caught off guard by your own curiosity. You see a figure at the corner of your right eye it's just standing there staring at you. You quickly turn to get a good look at it but it's suddenly gone. "Huh...," you say aloud. Then you look back up at the sky but the staring figure is in your view. It's that tall. You quikcly back away, tripping over the corpses and rubble. Your looking up at the dark figure, is it a shadow? It looks like the absolute black outline of a cloked figure, it's head is looking straight down at the ground but it slowly starts to lift it's head revealing a faceless white mask where it's face would be. You try to run but it grabs you by the neck and throws you onto the rubble. It quickly walks over to you while your on the floor and picks you up again with out any struggle to throw you like a rag doll once more. Your'e getting hurt bad by the amount of force being done by the rubble. You try to get up but it's to strong and to quick for you to even try and fight back. Your starting to black out or are you dying? The faceless figure looks down at you as if it were mocking you, it grabs you again with your blood dripping on the ground. Your eyes are almost lifeless but you can't die, not now. But your'e to weak to even try to stay alive. "I think.....I'm going....to die........." you think to yourself. You slowly close your eyes in exhaustion and weakness. The figure begins to take it's mask off to reveal its true face as you start to mentally fade away.......Are you dying?
To be continued....
(okay that one probably wasn't as good. Sorry for that was tired when I wrote it. I'll still write more if you'd like)
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Fri Jul 20, 2007 11:47 am |
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cool i still got to read most of it
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