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 User is Offline kasedogg08   Post Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 2:30 pm
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Here i sit all alone
Waiting for that loving touch
Will you be my angel
The angel from my dreams

Will there ever be a release
For me from this endless hell
You are it i can feel this
Please hold me, kiss me, anything

If you arent my angel
Why are you here
To tease me and torture me?
I ask you end my misery

Will there ever be a release
For me from this endless hell
You are it i can feel this
Please hold me, kiss me, anything

You can save me with one act
Simple as it is
It'll be the hardest you ever do
Tell me you'll love me forever

Will there ever be a release
For me from this endless hell
You are it i can feel this
Please hold me, kiss me, anything

Will there ever be a release
For me from this endless hell
You are it i can feel this
Please hold me, kiss me, anything



Personally i know i dont like hearing anyhting bad about things i write or anything but be honest and itll be the greastest deed you have done all day...(besides save a life)...anyway i need your opinions in order to get better.

Thanks all who respond
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 User is Offline Trooper   Post Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 4:18 pm
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If you arent my angel
Why are you here
To tease me and torture me?
I ask you end my misery


I like it. reminds me of someone from long ago, at another time in my life. that feeling still lingers to this day.
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 User is Offline kasedogg08   Post Posted: Fri May 08, 2009 5:44 pm
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Thanks that helps anything i should improve on?
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