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Wed Jul 25, 2007 7:09 pm |
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Our Secret Place
I know a place we can run to,
And do those things we want to.
Where no one else will know you,
And will just be us two.
They won’t know who we are.
I know a place where we can hide out,
And no one’s gonna find out.
We can let our love out.
We can scream our names out.
They won’t know who we are.
Let me take you there.
I wanna take you there.
Let me take you there.
I just wanna take you there.
I know a place where we can be together,
And stay this young forever,
Where no one knows who we are.
I know I won’t let go of you ever.
They won’t know who we are.
I know a place to hide our thoughts in.
A place we won’t get caught in.
They won’t know who we are.
I know a place that feels like heaven.
They won’t know who we are.
Let me take you there.
I wanna take you there.
Let me take you there.
I just wanna take your there.
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Wed Jul 25, 2007 8:16 pm |
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Nice one. U gonna use it as a song?
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| elephant_lost wrote: |
| Nice one. U gonna use it as a song? |
...hmm...I think anypoem with music can be sung...
...great poem though...
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Fri Jul 27, 2007 2:50 pm |
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I only asked cuz she posted another poem that she was probably gonna use as a song.
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Fri Jul 27, 2007 11:40 pm |
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no this one is just a poem that i wrote for my bf, but i liked it alot so i decided to post it and see what others thought. Thank you all very much for the compliments. I am glad you all like it.
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TOFU JET AWAYYYYY!
92% of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you're one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off
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| teardrop17 wrote: |
| no this one is just a poem that i wrote for my bf, but i liked it alot so i decided to post it and see what others thought. Thank you all very much for the compliments. I am glad you all like it. |
Yur welcome.
Can't wait to hear more.^^
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Sat Jul 28, 2007 1:35 pm |
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heheh well here is another one.....
Snow White Queen
Let the snowflakes on your lips
Remind you of my kiss.
A silhouette of us
Is painted in the winter mist.
Against a moonlit sky
All your pain will die,
As frost becomes my embrace.
Forever we stand, you and I.
In the chilled air the stars gleam.
I’ll feel you with my cool life stream.
Icy to the touch, but inside on fire for you.
Always I’ll be, your snow white queen.
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TOFU JET AWAYYYYY!
92% of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you're one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off
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