ah...well, this is kind of weird since i don't really like showing my stories to ppl... so i'll just ask ^^;
a couple of years ago a teacher of mine saw me writing and asked about it, and she said i should try and publish my work...but i'm not really sure, since most of my stories are romances ^^; i've tried writing adventure, even horror ones, but they always end up having a happy couple living together XD
most of the stories are (hadnwritten) more than 50 sheets (both sides) so they are quite long and i think they could make short books....
so...yeah...i'm...*gulp* willing to share a short part of one story with you if you'd like, but then tell me you'd like to see and i'll post it here XD i'm kinda shy with what i write since, well, i try to write things i'm afraid of or that i really want to happen XD so yeah...what do you think?
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Fri Jun 13, 2008 3:48 pm
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I am up for reading anything. But if you are uncomfortable showing us, then don't worry about it. I mean, you don't have to if you don't want to. But like I said, i am up for reading anything. And I love romance. I never get to read it for some reason. Could be that I don't want people seeing me buy a romance novel because I am a guy XD
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haha, yeah that could be it, but, hell, who cares?! XD
ok, this...well, the stories i write are kinda with characters from gundam wing ^^; that's why i'm kinda shy...ahm....i'll pm you ok? ^^; it's kinda...i'm embarrassed XD
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Leon: "Your right hand comes off?"
Infinite in mystery is the gift of the goddess
We seek it thus, and take it to the sky
-Loveless, Act I
Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return
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Fri Jun 13, 2008 4:30 pm
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oh damn XD sorry, days are as busy as ever ^^;
ok here we go:
Hidden:
The lithe girl tossed her head from side to side on her pillow, her forehead soaked in cold sweat and her whole body trembling in fear. She turned in her deep sleep and kicked the sheets off the bed, hugging the cushions close to herself. It had been two months and one week since she had started hearing that disturbing voice inside her head, that voice which tortured mercilessly and urged her to kill herself.
"You know I don't do that...you're aching for death...you want to die. You think that only then I'll leave you to rest....that's wrong" There it was again; she hugged herself tightly and turned on her bed over and over. trying to run from the voice "You are failing miserably, girl"
"Leave me alone!" She screamed and woke up, sitting on the bed and gasping for air. Hentatsu brought her hands to her temples and clutched handfuls of hair, trying to calm down, her eyes wide as saucers.
"Tsk, tsk, tsk. Waking up won't help it...you're mine for three months more" Said the voice again, and the silent promise of torture came with a mocking chuckle.
"What do you want?! Who are you?! Why me?!" She said desperately, tears running down her checks and sobs assaulting the slight frame. She hugged her knees close to her chest and buried her face on them.
"What do I want? Your pain...grief...I'll never grow tired of looking at your scared eyes...of tasting your sweat..." Hentatsu felt then a hot tongue against her cheek and flinched away from it, falling onto the ground and crawling to the corner of her dark room "I think I'll have lots of fun these next months"
"Please....what did I do?"
"C'mon, you ask too many questions! Ahem, I am a Locusts, and you should be happy! I cannot kill you...I'll just torture you" The girl cried harder and shook her head, curling deeper into herself "And it's because I like you...you're so friendly...but lonely....I'm considering to take you with me...you are so fun!" Hentatsu shivered endlessly and started to rock back and forth
"Make it stop....make it stop....make it stop..."
so that's it XD it doesn't even have a name since i've only written about a third part of the whole story (not this, this is like the intro), but if i were to publish something, i think this would be the first one XD
what do you think? good, bad? ^-^
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Favorite RE4 quote
Salazar: "I've sent my right hand to dispose of you"
Leon: "Your right hand comes off?"
Infinite in mystery is the gift of the goddess
We seek it thus, and take it to the sky
-Loveless, Act I
Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return
-Loveless Act III
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Wed Jun 18, 2008 4:56 pm
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You've certainly got the suspense in there. As I've been giving quite a few ratings out of 10 recently I'd give that part 6/10. It's definitely better than average from other things I've seen.
One of my college tutors was talking to me about getting some of mine published but I think they'd all need some work done on them to be at publishing standards.
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thanks guys! and there's no connection yet cos there's no gundam character names ^^; i made Hentatsu up out of one of them XD but she's my own character! ^-^ and yeah stappy, it's my user name for windows live XD
EDIT: thanks LJ ^-^, i know it needs some work there ^-^ i think i'd ask someone to check it before actually publishing it XD let's say...all my teachers XD
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Favorite RE4 quote
Salazar: "I've sent my right hand to dispose of you"
Leon: "Your right hand comes off?"
Infinite in mystery is the gift of the goddess
We seek it thus, and take it to the sky
-Loveless, Act I
Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return
-Loveless Act III
endnekind
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Wed Jun 18, 2008 5:13 pm
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Very good. Very good indeed. I thought it deserved a 9.5/10 myself. But Why do I always have to rate things after LJ? Maybe there should be a third person, then we would be like the judges on american idol...except that we judge just about everything, not just songs XD
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crazed4now wrote:
You're my new favorite person, endy.
Gencdo wrote:
endy. I've decided you are now the proud owner of all my hugs!
Private Pansy endnekind of the Brotherhood
People who have hugged me:
crazed xINFINITY (Big hug winner! Gets exclusive oncoming hugs!)
Gary
Melkor
Arc
monausicaa
Tsuki
Kintai
SuperSayianBahamut
Gencdo
People who wouldn't:
Shandris (All her hugs are belong to neil)
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i'll let you see...but please don't laugh XD ok?
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