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Sat May 14, 2011 5:37 pm |
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My poetry..
has no title.
I Walk away from you uncertain about the things i have said,
i watch you walk away ,my heart grieving the things i dread,
my heart ache's for what i yearn to say my mind cloudy every time i think of you,
my soul weeps at how things must be, and at unspoken truths hidden by the lies,
i know that I'm nothing but a naive fool for thinking of the hope of a peaceful life with you,
standing stunningly and beautifully by my side, knowing you'll never leave.
Yes my heart may weep but i shall show you none such thing all's i shall show you is...
my corrupt and lying smile ^-^
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This is not bad actually
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Sun May 15, 2011 5:08 am |
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Mon May 16, 2011 11:53 am |
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one of my older poems...
forget
i forgot you and everything about you
i forgot how your smile used to get me throught the day
i forgot how you had to dance in the rain
i forgot how you always had to see the sunset
i forgot how you always had to see the stars rise
i forgot how your words could get me through the problem
i forgot how your touch could stop any briuse from aching
yes i have forgotten you completely...
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Mon May 16, 2011 12:00 pm |
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questions
if i searched the heavens
i would not find a angle half as beautiful as u
if i searched the earth
i would not find any one id rather be with
for when i see u i see the most beautiful girl on earth
of all this i am certain
yet i'm unsure about one question
"will u ever be mine"
in till then i know the answer
i can only say
"hello" and"good bye"
and yet i still long for the day i say"I LOVE YOU"
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Sun May 22, 2011 8:27 pm |
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corrupt smile (new version)
I Walk away from you uncertain about the things i have said,
i watch you walk away ,my heart grieving the things i dread,
my heart feels like it will break everytime i glance upon you,
my blood pours out everytime i think about you,
my scar's ache at the mention of you,
the only thing that soothes me is the sight of the very blood you wronged upon the floor,
the only thing that bring's me joy is the thought of the times we could of spent together,
but even those cause my blood to spill, even those make me weep,
i know not what i wish to do, but it all would have been better at yours side,
the scares you put upon my body are my favorite reminder of the wrong you've done,
I'm still dazed by your beauty even after you leave,
but no matter what i say nor how i feel will you ever be mine onces more,
i shall never know your wonderful touch again,
I will never be the same after what has been done,
Yes my heart may weep but i shall show you none such thing all's i shall show you is...
my corrupt and lying smile ^-^
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Wed Jun 15, 2011 5:27 pm |
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I hate this feeling in my chest,
i hate this longing for you,
i hate that i love you,
i hate that i would do anything for you,
i hate that i can only see you,
i hate that i can only dream of you,
i hate this feeling of pain that you have caused,
i hate this heart still beating in my chest,
i hate the blood stains on the carpet,
i hate the blood still running though my veins because of you,
I hate you! I hate you! I Hate You!
But.....I Love You more than i ever could.....
I love you more than anything else on this plant,
I love you more than my very soul,
i love you with everything that i am,
I Love You! I Love You! I Love You More Than My Own Life!
But it matters not fore you will never be mine no matter how much i try to make it so.... No matter how much i hate you... Or how deeply i love you......
So i say just leave this hole in my chest and be happy with whatever you choose!
And please always believe my cruel and corrupt smile ^^
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Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:47 am |
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if you try your best then you would be able to becomes a good writer.that poems are really nice.thanks for sharing.
but why u doesn't get the the title?i like the 3rd one that means "i hate this feelings".
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Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:16 am |
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thanks
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