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My name In a Poem...
I did this in Creative Writing class last semester, because I was bored and had access to a computer...its my name...[lol]
Many waves have crashed upon the shores
Open water through which the currents flow,
Rain washes out, falls down, splatters about
Graciously the tender drops of liquid
Animated in the sparkling light, spill over and over
Needless to say it was grace and beauty that caught mine eye.
Lying stagnated in the wind, such
An opposition, like a foil,
Yin and Yang. Water and moon, push and pull
Never linked, yet always connected. Good and
Evil.
Caught up in a vertical decent
Ascending
Silently throughout the
Havens. Feeling the wrath.
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Awesome work! I remeber doing stuff like this in Writer's Craft class. This is a way better one than I made!
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ha...cool...thanks...
I love writing...
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Thu Sep 21, 2006 6:21 pm |
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kudos! kudos! i like the yin and yang and moon and water! it's so smooth flowing.
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oh my goodness i havent been here and forever
-guilt major-
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Thu Sep 28, 2006 8:19 pm |
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welcome back! yay!
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Fri Oct 06, 2006 11:11 am |
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Even though this does seem to be a fine arrangement of words, I have always thought that good poems should rhyme... And my search for rhymes in this seems to be in vain.
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Mon Oct 09, 2006 12:42 pm |
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try to go to post put up by Shandris_Dark, i'll be there, we also rhyme anywhere that has to do with poems. ^_^ here's one of mine:
consisting of nothingness,
my empty space does not bring me pain.
it does not contradict, speak ill-words, or bring up subjects to
cause me to go insane.
here i stand counting hair strands
with no feeling but yet remorse is there as if i walk on no land
i felt as if i was exiled, contained no formula
running from the shadows of my heart to not isolate as if i'm
contained within the bermuda living within alantis as miyazaki would
call laputa.
the nothingness i anticipated is like heaven above and earth below.
except that the perfect world is not sins written in a row.
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