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Wed Jul 02, 2008 2:29 pm |
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my love pome Day by Day
Day by Day :
Day by day our lives go on,
As lives usually do.
Yet, sometimes our lives seem to stop
Mid-cycle.
Leaving us confused, scared.
Lives are tricky that way.
Day by day, our lives go on,
As lives usually do.
Yet, sometimes if we're lucky enough,
That special person will walk right in
At just the right time
And brighten it up a bit.
Lives are unpredictable that way.
Day by day, our lives go on,
As lives usually do.
Yet, sometimes in the middle of that
Ordinary life,
Love will bring you a fairy tale
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| Gencdo |
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Sat Sep 27, 2008 3:52 pm |
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I love the repitition and parralellism of the first two lines...it's very effective
the sound pattern is also very easy to the ear, a lovely poem! ^^
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Ladies and gents welcome to my disclaimer, yep that’s right my disclaimer. Protect your families, I contain explicit depictions of things which are real these real things are commonly known as life, so if it sounds sarcastic don't take it seriously, if it sounds dangerous don't try it at home or at all and if it offends you, just ignore it.
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Wed Oct 29, 2008 7:40 am |
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this poem is really good. The repetition makes the poem get it's meaning across =)
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