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My first Fantasy novel (Drylor The First Artifact)
Now you may ask, hey Lakwimi, how does this apply to this section?! Well, I'll tell you, I'm a fan and this is a form of art! Not only that but originally when I was, hmm lets say 10 years old. I came up with a great idea for an MMORPG and I named it Drylor. As I grew up I realized that was a pipe dream, so I decided to use the binders of information and maps I made for the world of Drylor for a book, 9 books in fact. This is the start of a new legacy.
It’s not a short story but an actual novel that I wrote myself. It is about a man that suffers amnesia and struggles to regain his memory throughout the story. As he does, he realizes that his brother has become corrupted and is on team Jacob, which of course he just can’t stand for since he loves Edward. (No, really I’m just kidding)
Back to being serious, Throughout the book, the main character, Von slowly gathers his memory back and makes it his mission in life to end his brother’s heartless massacres and stop him from destroying the world of Drylor.
If you like Fantasy and Action Adventure type books then I almost guarantee this book will not disappoint. It has a great story line, it is fast paced and filled with great description of the lush landscapes of Drylor and the creatures that inhabit it.
If I have perked your interests here is what the back of the book says and also a picture of the front cover!
When a man wakes up inside a cage that is being carried through
an underground city, he has no idea where he is or what has
happened to him. As Von, a victim of amnesia, is taken to a jail
cell to await his fate amongst elves, humans, dwarfs, gnomes, and
halflings, he is told he is a member of the Royal Guard of Genisus.
It is not long before he is transported to the palace where he
meets an impatient king who eventually returns him to his jail
cell while deciding his destiny.
As Von’s memory slowly returns, he discovers that he is the only
one who can protect Drylor—a world that abandoned him—
from its greatest evil, his own brother. Through his journey to the
truth, Von meets an unlikely group of friends who are willing
to sacrifice everything to help him stop his brother Scarlet
from annihilating the only world they have ever known.
As Von’s past becomes clear and reveals his future, he soon
realizes the only way he can end his brother’s heartless
massacres is to find him and kill him.
If you're interested in my book beyond critiquing it, you can find it by searching Drylor The First Artifact on any major book retailer's website. =)
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Wed May 04, 2011 8:26 am |
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I may check it out Ryan, but from what I've read so far of your post seems a little Trigun. Definitely sounds like Trigun lol.
I have one question and I hope you don't think this post is unnecessarily cruel, but if your writing style/world is not Robert Jordan calibre, I'm afraid I cannot in good faith read an epic fantasy.
BUT! I am truly happy for you to have written a book and got it published! That is awesome and also one of my dreams. I hope all turns out well for you.
Cheers!
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