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Tue Aug 16, 2005 8:42 pm |
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Lander's Revenge-A Story
*Warning- Some content is not suitible for Younger Audiences for Gore and Violence.*
Prolougue
Long ago in a far away land there was a prince and a princess whom fell madly in love. The Princess was the most renound White Mage in the world. She had stopped millions of people from dieing in the Teloman war where the world was under attack of the dark lords of old, called Draknors. These vile creatures came from the ashes of vampires. Not living, yet not dead, they would feed on others flesh in order to survive. Having the ability to attack in sunlight they would tear open homes and eat the families inside them. The worst part was that these creatures looked exactly like humans. Their only difference was their eyes, they were bright red, and the fact that before they would kill they would become grotesque creatures with long black talons and gleaming pearl fangs, dripping their last victims blood. An attack by them meant certain death, and only those whom possesed extreme power could stop them. Then the Princess created a gem called Orenda's Moonstone. This gem was given to families and all they had to do was hold it up to vanquish the Draknors. The Prince was a Druid who dwelled upon magic, both light and dark, in his room. Some even say that he had the power to recreate the life essence itself. Their families agreed for them to be wed as it was beneficial for both contries. Then suddenly in a bizarre chain of murders began in the comunity. And then after each killing on the door the murderer wrote "To us my Darling". As more people were killed the villagers began to become more rebellious and started to wonder what was going on. Rumors then spread about the Prince being the Murderer. And to the royal families horror the Prince began to become more of a monster everday. He began to eat raw meat and drank the blood of the slabs of meat that he carnivorously devoured. Then on the day they were to be wed the Prince killed the Princess. But to the Prince's dismay the Princess bore a child named Valent a few days before. Worrying for her son's welfare as the Prince became more and more vile she sent him to Lady Nanuls house to live and prosper.After the death of the Princess and the dissapearance of the Prince the families became as vile as the Prince once was. For twenty years the fueding families fought each other and their fueds ended up killing innocent people in the crossfire everday. The Princess's family soon became known as The Silver Opals and the Prince's as The Bloodgems.Yet, Lady Nanul continued to teach Valent the ways of magic, as she knew, and covered his eyes from the harsh world for as long as she could. Then as their cruel war continued the contries began to forcefully inlist their citizens for the front line, a certain death sentance. This is where we find Valent, an aspiring young mage, caught in a battle for darkness.
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Chapter One
"Open this door now!!" Came a demanding shout from outside the small windmill or Lady Nanul. Valent peered outside the small window next to his bed to see what was all the commotion. "I swear there is no one by the name of Valent in this home, so please sirs you may be on your way." Said an old sage to the group of Imperial Gaurds standing outside the window. "Old woman! Stop resisting or else we will have to forcefully take the new Recruit. As you know resistance has a penalty of death!" The General yelled at her forcefully as he pushed onward twords the entrance. The old woman stood in front of the doorway and put her arms out. "No, You have no reason to---" Then the General thrusted his sword deep through her body. "Lady Nanul!!" Came a shout from inside the windmill. As Valent rushed outside to help her he was seized by the Imperial Gaurds. "You must come with me now!" The General exclaimed as they forced him onto a horse. Valent looked back and watched as Lady Nanul's limp body faded away in the distance. Now in his field of view came a bleak remnant of a town. The houses were boarded up and all life seemed to be locked away from view. All Valent saw was a bleak dismal leap foward into darkness. As he struggled to be free he felt a cold numbing sensation in his neck and the grip of one very large hand. Valent awoke in a tent next to a young White Mage.
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"Hello..." Valent said slowly regressing out of his daze. "Finnally your awake!" Came a you voice from the other side of the tent. "You've been out cold for almost a day now." She said as she handed him a vial full of a dark purple liquid. "Dont worry it wont kill you." She said as he stared blankly at the vial. Valent lifted himself up and sat straight. He then got a good look of the mage in front of him. She seemed about his age, maybe a little younger, her face was vibrant and full of color as he blue eyes seemed to brighten any shroud of darkness in his mind. Her flowing dark brown hair was tied up in a bow and her hands were covered in a layer of blood. Her light skin made the contrast of the violent red blood almost shocking as Valent drank the vial. A low grumbling noise came from his stomach as he drank the thick liquid. "That means its woking." The Mage stated as the low grumble became a loud roar. "So.." Valent said over his loud stomach "Im Valent, what would be your name?" The girl turned her head and smiled "I am Henta, the White Mage of this squad." Henta noticed his blank stare at the blood coating her arms so she added. "I am a special White Mage as my magic comes from my touch. I know alchemy but I much rather stick my arms in the wound and mend the fibers myself. I would divulge my hands into the wound or on it and---" Valent interupted her by saying "Well, thats pleasnt, but may I ask what is going on here?"
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"Well, You need not worry as long as I am around Valent!" Henta said with a grin. "This war will be over before you can say..." Henta looked down with a sigh "You are stuck in a war with no end." She said a tear rolling down her face "We all will die...." She began to cry. "Im sorry I didnt mean to make you cry, here let me help." Valent said but his offer was uickly refused. "You should meet the other people her I think!" Henta said with a plastered smile. "Are you---" Valent began "Go!!!" Henta screamed shoving him out the door. As he walked to the next tent he distinctly heard a whimper. "Hello?" Valent said into the tent. "Come in." Said a hardened voice from inside the tent.
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"Hi I am Valent" Valent said as he was encountered by a large man wielding a large axe. "I am Frunt, the swordmaster of this troop. What do you want?" Frunt said bluntly. "I just wanted to get to know my crew better, thats all." Valent said. "Dont worry kid, The battle has not gotten to our outpost yet, for now we are safe. So you seem scrawny what do you do anyway?" Frunt asked grimacing. "Well, I am a novice mage. I just was beginning to get the hang of it when I was taken from my foster mom." Valent said peering at the ground. "So lost someone too huh? Well, fight for them, after all right now it could quite possibly be your only reason to live." Frunt said sadly. "Well anytime you need anything come by and just say hi! Dont worry I will watch your back on the battlefield! Go nextdoor and meet the Sage, Tena." Frunt said with a soft smile. "She can help you with your magic...unless you want to learn from me in sword mastery." Frunt said his eyes suddenly getting less intrusive. "I do know a little about swords, It was a hobby of mine suring my stay with Lady Nanul." Valent said. "Well see you later!" Valent said before Frunt could voice another word. As Valent walked out the door Frunt thought Lady Nanul......Who is she?!
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Now is the time for you to decide on a path of young Valent!! Will he study with Frunt or Tena!!!!
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Cool! Just vote and after a day then its all Sage!! 
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Dude he should be a swordmaster..
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Well, I personally love Sages, Mages,and such but if you want a swordsman, Just vote for that.
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Haine wants to read your story but you said some contents aren't suitable for younger readers by what do you mean by that?? Like blood and fighting stuff?
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Yes, Blood and Gore 
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ooh lol Haine loves blood and gore lol ok Haine shall read! speaking of which Sea... REPLY IN THE RPG OR HAINE WILL PLACE HER WRATH UPON YOU!!!
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(Well, Swordmaster it is then!)
After seeing the wide-eyed Tena in her tent Valent was forever perturbed from being a mage. "Wow...I never wnat to be that psychotic.." Valent was saying as he went to Frunt to take him up on the offer of becomeing a swordmaster. "Well,you need to hold the sword like this." Frunt would begin as he lead Valent through a qrueling regime in order to become suitable for war. "So, Frunt? How do you think I am doing?" Valent asked on day after practicing his parrying skills. "I guess your doing all right for a begginer....Yet you should watch out for attacks from the rear more often, I seem to always catch you off gaurd if you are not facing me. You need to use all your senses if you are to be a swordmaster!" Frunt would say with a laugh.
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