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 User is Offline Guest   Post Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 12:21 pm










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I hope

I hope you dont come down with me
Down in the water
Drowning
Im falling under
I hope to get up and try to find you
you...before u drowned with me
im falling i look to open my eyes
and see that you've gone out of breath.
i swim to you and swim to shore
i try to save you find help
i find no help...
and no longer could save you
i do a funeral on my own
dig a hole for you from the sand
but..
WAIT!i see a person
and go see if he had any transport
he did i asked if i could use it in emergency
after 10 hours i lost hope that we could get home
and find u a proper funeral and with your family and friends
but i didn't as i promised
and we lost the boat we were lost
and as i lay here crying to my death
i think about you and stop crying all the great memories
and wait till i die.
and hope to see you in heaven

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That was the first poem i ever made...
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 User is Offline leaf   Post Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 3:10 pm
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nice poem
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Nice Poem. It seems a bit creepy to me though.
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