I Have Finished a Book! - Bell, Book, and Candle

So I recently finished and edited a book that I am now calling the Watchman's Bell, Book, and Candle. This is a fantasy story taken from an abundance of imagination and careful thought.

I decided to make a topic on my story because I am trying to get it out more before I try and publish it. Right now, the story can be found on fictionpress.com, but you need an account in that case. It's a real easy setup, and I take annonymous reviews. I just love to hear what people think. In any case...

So what is BBC about? Let me tell you.

Description:
A young girl, her fate determined through a setup marriage, is enveloped into a land of fantasy and change, where little is what it seems, and no one is who they appear to be. Scared Marie is sent cascading into a struggle between the Watchman and a lord residing deep within Replicate Castle.

But problems arise as Haven tries to return Marie home, when they can't find the corresponding portal, and the book that brought her here is stolen. The creatures within the castle, called the Idioms, named for the effect they have on the castle's boundaries through the meaning of their saying, threaten to break their grip to their portraits.

Developing into a growing chaos, the Idioms strike back against the castle in hopes to force their way through the walls to the worlds that lie in wait beyond. But there is more to the castle and what lies within it then this strange lord's ambitions.



So that is the description of my story, and though I imagine it has little typos here and there, it is actually done. The story took me about a year to make, and I would really appreciate hearing * on what people think. I will make a download to the story in the near future so it can be read on the computer at your leisure at any time.


The link to the first chapter of the story on Fictionpress can be found here: Bell, Book, and Candle

Here is the link to the download: Download of Story