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Mon Dec 12, 2005 6:36 pm |
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heres a comic
nothing special.
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Mon Dec 12, 2005 6:38 pm |
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lol. Good one. Not sure about the use of language though.
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Mon Dec 12, 2005 6:47 pm |
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well technically i didnt use any real bad words i edited one and used leet speak for the other...but if anybody strongly objects or is offended ill change it in the future.
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Tue Dec 13, 2005 11:18 am |
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hey man what is up send me money
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Tue Dec 13, 2005 1:49 pm |
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i shall post more later tonight. computers at school wont let me use paint.
evil conspirecy i tell you!
--EoX-
i know my spelling sucks
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Thu Dec 15, 2005 9:14 am |
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What am I missing?
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Thu Dec 15, 2005 11:05 am |
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EoX i just dont find them funny. sorry man.
but i can tell you why at least.
currently you are just a beginner webcomic, your characters dont have names, and you dont have any jokes yet.
you have to have a story at least, you can make up your own, or you can have the characters follow a novel or a game or some already defined path in some literature.
you have to give them names, give them emotions, give them reactions, give them personalities.
for instance, if you take the red guy over there, make him the "realist" in your comic, have him take everything for their literal meaning, web that into your comic, give him a quest and he's almost done.
for the green guy over there. make him a sarcastic agressive, as in he is a badass fighter with brains and knows how to irk the rest of the group (how ever large that group will be)
make sure to give all of your characters HUGE flaws, if you make them gods, it gets boring.
for instance, maybe the green guy is smart and powerful. but he doesnt know the meaning of alot of words. this sets him up to be sarcastic and have a hidden joke within his text. becareful as sarcastic jokes can turn for the worst easily if they are not understood.
the character portrats are just ideas, you (ofcourse) go with whatever you feel is right. and eventually the characters just having a background makes the whole comic funnier when something random happens.
good luck man, you obviously have the dedication to make webcomics.
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yah if i offer advice, i go into detail.
i see he has potential. but the current jokes are kinda just "look i broke the 5th wall again" (or is it 4th wall)
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yea, instead of saying "Whats with him and swords" in the last frame, make up something stupid like, "Whats up with him with Long things" (pun, hopefully some one gets this joke), something like that. pretty stupid but at least a laugh.
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