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Hell Warriors
Erm, this was originally for the the HB and OC contest, but then I found out it was suppose to be a short story, then I got pissed cause I just spend my whole day making sure this sounded perfect..LMAO
So here's the prologue..I'm prolly never gonna continue writing this..so if someone else wants to continue, go ahead.
There is originally 4 characters, all mine thankyou, Xiang Hua Mei, Yasmina Wolfe, Katsumi Itami, Annalie Jannina (Pronounce Yannina)
They're kinda working for this lady name Ishtar because she has something against all of them, I might continue, I might not, depends on if I have any idea or not.
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Flames flickered lazily alongside the dark corridor, hitting little light in the corners. The dark marble floor would mirror the actions of the ember, flickering ever so lightly. The silenced darkness crept over the place as not one dare to move; they sense a presence, a powerful presence. It was one of them, the so call warriors.
A dark shadow bestowed itself upon the surface, its heels clicking away on the marble floor. Her aura alone made every creature’s hair stand on its ends.
“You wanted me?” her stoic voice called out. As if on cue, the large throne at the end of the corridor turned, revealing a figure wrapped in dark violet cloak, boney hands wrap around a staff with a dark orb.
“Come,” it commanded in a raspy voice, her free hand motioning for the blond girl to step forward.
She hesitantly walked up to the figure, kneeling down on one knee with her head bowed. She felt an icy cold hand slither its way to her chin as she tried to hold in the pain, her jaw in a vice-like grip, long nails digging into her skin.
“Where is it?” it hissed in her face, “where is the Authentic Divine?” she tighten her jaws as she replied, “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
The figure dug its nails deeper into her face, scarlet blood trailed down her pale, neck making a perfect contrast.
“Don’t play with me, Annalie, where it is?” Annalie’s eyes harden as she looked the figure directly in the eye, “I don’t know.”
The figure pushed her face away as if she was on fire and stood up, “Annalie Jannina, I want the Authentic Divine, and what I want, I will get. If I find out you’re lying,” the figure said, her hood falling down to reveal a woman with long cascading navy hair, her jaded eyes sunken in as her lip curled up in a cruel smirk, “your brother’s soul will be mine.”
Annalie’s face remained emotionless as she bowed again, “Yes, Ishtar.”
Without another word, Ishtar walked back into the darkness as Annalie stood up.
Ake…she thought, I will get you out.
Little by little, slowly, but surely, the dark creatures advanced toward her, ready for their midnight snack. Those who were smarter knew better, never mess with a Warrior.
Before one could blink, the creatures were on the floor, dark blood spilled on the marble floor as heads were detached from their original bodies.
Annalie’s eyes narrowed, looking for her next opponent. Finally making sure there were no nuisance in the way, dark wind began to surround her and within seconds, she was gone.
Each creature stood still for a couple of minutes, fearing that what they saw was an illusion. After of what seem like an eternity of silence, they finally let out their first breath in a long time.
She was gone.
The Hell Warrior was gone.
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lol, Im not so sure if I have any ideas left..this is an *original story*
It took me about 3 hours to come up with just 4 names..(and with the help of Kai) haha
but maybe, just for you Shiv. (;
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lol thats nothing compared to my name searching.
im writing too , but im out of ideas as well ... i started with a chapter one and continued with a chapter six XD theres no 2,3,4 or 5 
but i like the story and you should continue with it ( puppy eyes ) PWEEEEAAAAASEEEEE!
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LMAO
Alright, but I'm gonna need some ideas first..my mind is like
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ideas? how about there being some kinda romance between the hell warrior and some other person?
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