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Haine's Poetry (With a friend)
lol ok haine did these two poems in class with a friend (since we don't do ANYTHING at all in english lol so we just play lol) hope these will entertain your minds an see how poetic haine and her friend is lol actually this should be called "5min poetry with people who can't rhyme and write poetry" lol
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I want to die
I am going to commit suicide
the world is cruel
They all think I'm a fool
I cry every night
with my own little light
the shadows follow
with my heart so hollow
so now I say good bye
for now I must die!
(note lol that top suicide one is suppose to be funny lol you kinda have to think in a stupid way how that looks lol)
My Sweet Kitten
In my woeful dreams
I hear these splendid screams
The screaching voice of hers
sound like a gentle cat's purr
She's my angel of beauty
Though others find her ugly
But love is unexplainable
It sucks that she's unreliable
She looks like Captain Crunch
But I love her very much.
To My Lover
(lol Haine's friend wrote most of this one lol this shows how boring english is lol)
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 3:35 pm |
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i liek the second one! There are some rhymes in there that are pretty good for just 5min writting!
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 4:06 pm |
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xP yea... the second one is good... the first one is eh... 5 minutes worth of poetry in english :p
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:44 pm |
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I wouldn't show those to your teacher. My girlfriend wrote something like that once when she was in school and had to go to counseling afterwards...
School plus Suicide do not go well together, even when just written
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 7:22 pm |
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lol haine already showed it to her teacher lol he's a pretty laid back guy like when you ask him something he says "Don't ask me I just work here" lol
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 7:55 pm |
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Those are the best teachers to have. It's nice that he isn't mean about the whole sucidie thing. In some schools you'd get suspended or have to do counsiling for that. At least in the USA here you would. I'm glad I havn't been in school for, oh, 7 years now...
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:01 pm |
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lol most of haine's teacher's don't are really lol
for example there was a kid in drama who wrote a suicide monologue for her final performance and it was bad so the teacher gave him a 60% lol and her parents called him and yelled at him for not realizing that it was a REAL suicide not
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"Watashi wa omoide niwa naranai sa."
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:11 pm |
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wow that's heavy! so the people thought she was acting when that was her actual goodbye!?
woah...
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:35 pm |
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lol yeah, but she was so bad at it that her real life performance wasn't even good lol it was so funny when the teacher told us that lol its mean but how can you get 60% on your own goodbye? specially when your "acting" would be super real? lol
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"Watashi wa omoide niwa naranai sa."
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:48 pm |
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that is horrible!
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 9:02 pm |
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I love the second one. I was never one for english, lol, I hated the fact that there is no set right or wrong answer.
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Wed Jul 26, 2006 9:30 pm |
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Ah... that is why i love it... so... unstructured... thats why i cant stand math... to many set rules...
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Thu Jul 27, 2006 12:13 am |
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AHHH don't even speak of math on here! haine still has 5 more days.... FIVE MORE HORRIBLE BORING DAYS!@!
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[Thank you Unny!]
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"Watashi wa omoide niwa naranai sa."
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Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:52 am |
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the sweet kitten kinda nice to read. easy to understand.
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Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:41 am |
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I wouldn't show those to your teacher. My girlfriend wrote something like that once when she was in school and had to go to counseling afterwards...
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in what w0rld do you live?
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