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Fri Jan 28, 2011 11:42 am |
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The Mountain
Each day I take one step up
Each night I fall 3 steps down
How long does it take
To turn a life around
I climb, and I climb
But no further do I get
It is a mountain in my mind
This pain I can't forget
I think I hear your voice
And the tears begin to fall
Then slowly I realize
I haven't moved at all
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Mon Jan 31, 2011 7:32 am |
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Hmmm... Seems to be a longing for a lost love or something? That is what I get.
I have a challenge for you! If you choose to accept it.
Challenge:
Take time to look over past events from your life. Choose one that makes you smile, when you think of it. Write a poem about it! Sounds simple, but trust me it is quite hard.
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RIP Kurt von D. Father figure to me, friend, and all around good human being. (July 22nd, 2010).
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And so castles made of sand melts into the sea, eventually
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I'm tired of wasting all my precious time
You've got to be all mine, all mine
Foxy lady
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Tue Feb 01, 2011 10:11 am |
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That is very hard... but some people can do it, it also reminds me of something my grandmother told me... I was in the char with her, making her listen to my music, and she said it sounded happy and then I told her it was about suicide, and then we got into a conversation about song writers and how they usually start off write depressing stuff but eventually they manage to write something happy, so it's practice, but writing sad stuff is alot easier. I find it's that way because you can look happy and nothings wrong, you fell great when your happy, but when your sad you feel sh*tty and you need to get it out so it's easier to write sad stuff...
Also I really like that poem Wolfy, I can't really tell what it is about though... I'll go and make an assumption...
I think maybe...
the first paragraphe sounds to me like you try to fix up your life and you manage too, but you end up falloing back lower then where you where.
the second:
you try and try to fix up your life but you never can manage, and it's kinda like fighting with your mind, and it hurts.
the third:
I can't make this one fit with my assumptions of the other two but it seems like someone died, and it took that to see that you haven't surpassed what you are tying to surpass yet?
I'm sorry if my guess is very innacurate, but at least I tried
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Mon May 16, 2011 2:19 pm |
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A Foreign Sensation
I heard those charming words you said
Your Chinese language ringing in my head
To the bathroom not the bed
As you say I am beautiful again and again
Your so soft and sweet
Every kiss was just as much a treat
I long for a day when again we will meet
Only then can we make this complete
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