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Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:03 pm |
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Calming the Tempest
My eyes blinded with rage
My hands tightened with anger
My words laced with fury
Yet your love calms the tempest
My eyes filled with tears
My hands empty with hopelessness
My words full of sorrow
Until your love calms the tempest
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Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:14 am |
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Really nice poem!
I love how it follows threw extremely well, it has a very nice pattern and it sticks to it 100%, so yeah, I really like this poem of yours Wolfy, please, post more of them 
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 11:19 am |
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A Ghost
Forever I walk in shadows
Invisible to the world.
The shell I wear is now hollow
It is the shell of a girl
A girl who speaks to softly
for anyone to see
A girl who treads too lightly
A ghost of who I used to be
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 11:20 am |
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Thanks for the compliments
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 2:18 pm |
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| WolfyLover22 wrote: |
A Ghost
Forever I walk in shadows
Invisible to the world.
The shell I wear is now hollow
It is the shell of a girl
A girl who speaks to softly
for anyone to see
A girl who treads too lightly
A ghost of who I used to be |
Powerful. I really like this one. Forlorn and wanting. I came relate to the second stanza quite a bit (other than the fact I'm not a girl).
I'm with slayker, if you have any more please feel free to post it either in a new thread or in this one.
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RIP Kurt von D. Father figure to me, friend, and all around good human being. (July 22nd, 2010).
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And so castles made of sand melts into the sea, eventually
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 2:26 pm |
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Thanks for the positive comments you guys. I write a lot when I am sad though, so just a forewarning that there probably won't be happy poems on here.
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 2:32 pm |
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I find the people put the most amount of emotion in when their sad or depressed and make some beautiful pieces of work.
Also, speaking for myself, I find depressing and sad things make me happy so no worries.
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RIP Kurt von D. Father figure to me, friend, and all around good human being. (July 22nd, 2010).
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And so castles made of sand melts into the sea, eventually
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I'm tired of wasting all my precious time
You've got to be all mine, all mine
Foxy lady
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You should try and click a couple ads on Funender each day to generate some revenue.
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 2:44 pm |
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Schizophrenia
It dances along my nerves
and tugs at the strings of my mind.
It blurs reality and fiction
and causes lapses in time.
No matter how hard I run
it always follows me.
This demon in hiding
an unseen enemy.
I fear if not cured
it will tear me apart.
There will be naught left,
but a crazed piece of God's art.
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 3:14 pm |
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Quite a bit darker eh? I've never had to battle a mental illness so it's hard to identify, but that the same time it paints a picture of what it's like and so I can guess.
Might I make a suggestion though... Which really I shouldn't...
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RIP Kurt von D. Father figure to me, friend, and all around good human being. (July 22nd, 2010).
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And so castles made of sand melts into the sea, eventually
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I'm tired of wasting all my precious time
You've got to be all mine, all mine
Foxy lady
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You should try and click a couple ads on Funender each day to generate some revenue.
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 3:17 pm |
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I am open to suggestions
Yeah I have to ask my husband a lot of times what is really happening as compared to what I think is happening. Half the time I forget I even talked to someone.
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 3:28 pm |
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Well my suggestion was in the hidden part my last post. You just have to click the button beside the word hidden.
Is Schizophrenia like multiple personality disorder or dissociative identity disorder?
I think in the movie a Beautiful Mind, the math genius has Schizophrenia... He hears whispers in his mind I think?
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RIP Kurt von D. Father figure to me, friend, and all around good human being. (July 22nd, 2010).
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And so castles made of sand melts into the sea, eventually
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I'm tired of wasting all my precious time
You've got to be all mine, all mine
Foxy lady
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You should try and click a couple ads on Funender each day to generate some revenue.
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 3:35 pm |
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Well honestly it can be very similar to the other illnesses you mentioned, and sometimes exhibits the same symptoms, but has more to do with irrational paranoia, and audio/visual hallucinations.
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 3:40 pm |
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Hallucinations... Which can manifest as whatever the mind wants I guess huh? Is it hard to tell what is a hallucination and what is real or impossible?
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RIP Kurt von D. Father figure to me, friend, and all around good human being. (July 22nd, 2010).
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And so castles made of sand melts into the sea, eventually
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I'm tired of wasting all my precious time
You've got to be all mine, all mine
Foxy lady
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You should try and click a couple ads on Funender each day to generate some revenue.
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 4:30 pm |
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Yeah it becomes increasingly hard to separate fact from fiction, and I often become even more frightened and irrational because of this.
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 11:30 pm |
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My mom has that, and apparently I might, I know I have very bad paranoia, and I sometimes hear stuff, but it's familiar voices of someone I know, that is no where around... so i don't know. I always told the spych I had no paranoia and didn't hear things, I don't like spychs knowing stuff about me.
But I really like that last one, keep posting them 
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