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Beautiful Executive
The wind blows through her hair.
She deftly mocks the world with her beauty.
The moon falls on her shoulder,
But she won’t let it stay.
Her cynicism keeps her safe,
Her androgyny keeps her alone.
An artist and a dreamer, she works for the Man,
A white-collar woman
Just a poem I wrote, tell me what you think.
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it's good ^^
you wrote it for your girlfriend or something ?
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| Dra Jean |
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Sun Mar 18, 2007 12:46 pm |
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| Tidus_lover wrote: |
| you wrote it for your girlfriend or something ? |
No, but it does remind me of someone that I know, although I didn't write it specifically about her.
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| Tidus_lover |
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Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:10 pm |
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oh I see.
It's good anyways ^^ keep going on
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awesome! you did a great job on that one
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its good yeah  like deep
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"I'll be here...why? ... I'll be 'waiting' here ... for what?... I'll be waiting ... for you ... so ... If you come here ... You'll find me. I promise."
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