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an idea
this is just an idea for a story that i may or may not start to write depending on what people think
The Game (Possible title)
ok the main idea here is that this will probably take place in the desert
there is a man who belives his god assasingned him the task of testing people
he kidnapps ppl and puts them into this game randomly saying either "You lose" or rarely "you win" and torturing them saying all the while they are being punished for losing the "game"
in his mind all this makes sense and he has no problem tourturing these people but the other have no idea what this man is trying to do or how far he'll go
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okay you oviously had no replys on this subject you started a year ago, but I'm going to reply anyways.
The idea sounds very deep I personally found it fasinating. ^-^; But I suppose you may have given up on it? If no I wanna read it please. 
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It sounds interesting, kind of a cross between Saw and summat to do with priests  , sounds like a good read. 
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damnit, i lost the game
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The concept of it is okay or somewhere close to being okay. In my opinion it is possible for this idea to be turned into a good story, but you must make it deeper, not forgetting twists and the other important things any writer should be aware of before writing anything. From my perspective; it’s very possible to be turned into a very deep and exciting story; make everything in it is there for a reason; like this man; why is he doing this? A question like that is an example of all the questions you will have to consider and writer their answers in the story; the big mistake will be when you answer by something like “It’s just like that…” or “Just because…” I think there are so many questions you can come up with from this idea and that’s why I am saying that your idea has the possibility to be something some people would enjoy reading. As for me; I will give my specific opinion about your story once I have more details about it.
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