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 User is Offline Jokerfest   Post Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 12:22 am
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most of my poetry is exremely negative because i wrote them during the times when I was at my worst, however i think that they are my best. comment on them? suggestions would be nice too Wink oh yeah and feel free to post your poetry too, i like to read others' as well.

anger

Anger circles in my head
Feeling something here is dead
And I'm sorry I can't fight
And I'm sorry I can't make it right
Can't live in the world with my head out of place
Can't breathe easy till all this is erased
And it's bad all these things
It's sad, everything
And I'm broken
I should have spoken
Louder
Until everyone could hear
But I flinch at the sound
all of it's
Fear
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sit with me
Sit with me and learn my voice
I give you an offer you have a choice
Look at my eyes and the blackness behind
Seek forever there is nothing to find
Dressed in white to fool the passersby
They see me shining, not the darkness in my eyes
Shut away the pretty things that I wish that I could see
Shut away all the pieces that don't belong to me

shut.

open.

don't open it anymore.

I would bring you pain not what you're looking for
Sit by me for awhile though I cannot hold you close to me
Just do not look too closely you will not like what you see
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the path
Do not wander the dark as I have done
I cannot leave because I cannot see to run
The steps ahead of me disappear with the light
I should not have wandered so far into this night
Stay away from the edge of the path you must take
I warn you to stray from this mistake
The blackness seeps into my veins
burrows into my soul
The darkness spills out around me and I shiver with cold
You would take me away but this is all that I know
There is no place that I run that the darkness can't go
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lupus day

Aching day to day, ignore it
Headache in my skull, ignore it
No blood in my fingers or my toes, ignore it
Get up and get going
Get up and move
Get up and ignore it
Ignore the feeling
Legs creaky, ignore it
creak, pop, crick ,snap, make a sound all the time

All the time

Day, night

Ignore it

I try everyday and then I sleep

sleep

creak in my dreams

snap

pop

pain

pain

pain

And I look up and I sigh
ignore it
it will never go away

sigh

and breathe into battered lungs
run and feel the numbness creep
topple to the ground

ignore it

pain

pain

pain

Everyday

Everyday

Everyday

and ignore it
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tell me
Tell me what should I do?
I have no money, and no heart to give
How can I possibly repay you?
I have no place of my own to live
Tell me good my friend what can I do?
When the decision I made I can't keep to
When all the lovers are lying
When soldiers are dying
The houses are burning
The mothers are mourning
The sky is grey and I cannot see
And the shadows look to challenge me
Do I grab the children and turn to run
And if all is lost and the shadows are close
Do I turn and become one?
And if there is a hope
And there is a care
How do I take all the children there?
I have no way to pay you
I have no money to give
I have no heart too
All I ask is that the children get to live
If they run past the danger
And make it safely through
And if they run past all the risks
What is the price I pay you
I ask this because of they way I have to live
Although I always have had nothing
I've always been asked to give
I empty my pockets onto the street
And I look into your eyes
Dark soulless black and big brown meet
I know that I am the prize
Me for them is what you finally declare
And I know that it is right
Go ahead and take me there
For I no longer need the light
Perhaps I never should have asked you what was the price
I should have left it alone
But I am not used to someone being nice
And there is no kindness I have known
Your face is a skeleton's mask
And you cannot help but laugh
What is so funny I turn to ask
You never had to choose me, there was a different path
The children skip away into the light
The monster grabs ahold of me
Now little one hold on tight
For you it was never free
So I closed my eyes and didn't fight
After all it is what I owe
I got sucked into the shadow
After all I had no choice but to go
So the children run free in the sun
And I am here below
I wonder if this is what I should have done
But the keeper won't let me know
And if I had never asked for a price
If I had thought it was free
If I had thought he was nice
What would he have done to me?
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 User is Offline leaf   Post Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 10:03 am
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wow great poems!
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^Thx for the awesome siggy shiva^ ^.^
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 User is Offline Jokerfest   Post Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 4:14 am
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thanks! yeah...i dont normally post poems, but i thought it was time for some healthy criticism...so it's actually good. im shocked...
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