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Tue May 10, 2011 9:44 am |
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A Sense of Peace
Amongst your gentle sweet smelling breeze
Beneath the shade of willow trees
A book resting upon my knees
I find a sense of peace.
Within the midst of sweat summer blooms
No walls to bind me within a room
I wipe away the veil of gloom
I find a sense of peace
When dusk finally settles in
My heart yearns to stretch its limbs
So I take a relaxing swim
And I find a sense of peace
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Tue May 10, 2011 10:23 am |
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Reminds me of a Haste The Day song.
Very nice.
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Tue May 10, 2011 10:39 am |
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Thank you. I try really hard to get how I feel out in words. It's hard to do when I am used to doing it in pictures instead.
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Tue May 10, 2011 10:43 am |
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oh no you're dead D=. lol.
and I know I express my feelings through lyrics, also...Haven't done it in awhile because I wrote quit e a few songs based on specific moods of that time, and my iPhone didn't transfer what I wrote so I lost like 12-13 =[...One is actually on here, called "The Truth".
The song yo ureminded me of was Autumn-
Red leaves blow in the wind
Leaving home and everything it's known behind
Barren branches wave goodbye
As the red leaves slowly die
Every flower stares and watches
As the wind it takes me away
Before, before the sun, sun shone upon me
Oh now, now the wind takes me away
Every flower, stares and watches
As the wind, as the wind takes me away, yeah
The peaceful part of it reminded me of the song, which is peaceful, to me. =D
Oh, and you are welcome!
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Tue May 10, 2011 11:09 am |
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Beautiful song. Autumn is my favorite season so I agree that I also feel peaceful then.
Petals line the ground
Beneath stems they once called home
Now I wish that I could find
A home to call my own
Winters chill closes in
I feel its breath flow through my hair
A change is coming for me
I can feel it in the air
I sit upon the cold ground
My will has whithered thin
Though I am without an end
I have yet to begin
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Tue May 10, 2011 11:22 am |
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Yes, listen to the acoustic version, it is brilliant. The regular version doesn't fit the lyrics or the emotion of the song properly, IMO.
I like that poem too. I can hear that as a song. :]
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depp is there for being naked and sweaty in chains, not for sex, i'm not gay >.>
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Mon May 16, 2011 2:21 pm |
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Thanks I will. Yeah I kind of had a song beginning in my head as I wrote it
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yay ^_^.
I haven't had much success with writing recently!
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Tue May 17, 2011 9:35 am |
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Keep at it, you will get back in the swing
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Tue May 17, 2011 9:40 am |
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tHANKS =d
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Thu May 19, 2011 8:32 am |
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Memory
Amazing the imprint that one can leave
Upon the first sight
You totally captivated me
In just one night
Our lips intertwined
and our hearts racing in our chests
You didn't have to say anything
Your eyes did the rest
Then we said our goodbyes
Parting into the morning breeze
Now when I think of your eyes
They are just a memory
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Thu May 19, 2011 9:09 am |
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That is a nice one too. =]
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depp is there for being naked and sweaty in chains, not for sex, i'm not gay >.>
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R.I.P Jimmy "The Rev" Sullivan! Forever the greatest drummer! |
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Fri May 20, 2011 9:06 am |
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Thank you. I have been feeling inspired as of late
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Fri May 20, 2011 2:29 pm |
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That's good.
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depp is there for being naked and sweaty in chains, not for sex, i'm not gay >.>
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Mon May 23, 2011 11:17 am |
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Yeah sometimes, but sometimes it's hard to put the inspiration on paper.
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