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Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:02 am |
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A poem
Today in school I had such a monotonous class, I couldn't sleep because the teacher's voice was infuriating and annoying. Instead of that I wrote this for my best friend who has been in NYC since christmas and we both don't know when he is coming back (soon I hope) although I have many wonderful friends, but he is my bestest friend lol 
Anyways, I am not so good in writing poetry so be honest when you give opinions about it ^^
The words I write in here
Goes to you Jess my dear
Although you are not near
Ur soul's something I feel
These letters are my tears
Remembering all the years
Our ambitions and dreams
oh-unforgotten memories
I remember fooling Mr.dully
God it was funny
Also creating the FBTG
That sure kept me busy
U know whats wrong before I cry
but if I do, you always know why
You are there to give me advice
U know me by my faults and demerits
My stubbornness something you like
Also you love my craziness
When others'd say "what's wrong"
I hear you saying "bring it on ! "
Faith is always in your heart
To make sure I won't fall apart
You always make me feel alright
You are the sun that gives me light
You are so far away
Yet so close to me
You are the whispers of the leaves
As I walk down the street
Don't know when we'll meet
Sometimes I just wanna scream
I want to think this is a dream
But quit sadly it is real
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Sat Apr 07, 2007 8:45 am |
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thats pwetty ... 10/10 for expressing urself 
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"I'll be here...why? ... I'll be 'waiting' here ... for what?... I'll be waiting ... for you ... so ... If you come here ... You'll find me. I promise."
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Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:34 am |
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Thanks ^^ I think this one is the third I write or the second, can't remember
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Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:47 am |
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it's really good, you should write more
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"I'll be here...why? ... I'll be 'waiting' here ... for what?... I'll be waiting ... for you ... so ... If you come here ... You'll find me. I promise."
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Tue May 08, 2007 11:07 pm |
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Thanks ^^
Yea, every three years maybe lol
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Wed May 09, 2007 11:20 am |
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lol
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"I'll be here...why? ... I'll be 'waiting' here ... for what?... I'll be waiting ... for you ... so ... If you come here ... You'll find me. I promise."
^^ thankyou Tidus_Lover! |
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Wed May 09, 2007 11:45 am |
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wow that is a really beautiful poem, so flowy and actually very affection.
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TOFU JET AWAYYYYY!
92% of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you're one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off
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Wed May 09, 2007 2:04 pm |
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Thanks 
Glad some people like it !
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Awsome poem... 
sorry for sounding stupid, but what's an FBTG
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Wed May 09, 2007 10:27 pm |
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lmao
That's not sounding stupid, that's something just we know, the poem I sent it to him, but I thought it's a good idea to post it here lol
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Thu May 10, 2007 1:17 pm |
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well i am sure he loved it, it was sooo pretty.
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92% of the teen population would be dead if Abercrombie and Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore. Put this in your signature if you're one of the 8% who would be laughing your head off
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Thu May 10, 2007 5:40 pm |
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R u going to become a poet?
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Quote of the day: "Evolution has ZERO evidence, otherwise I would have found it by now."
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Fri May 11, 2007 12:58 am |
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Thanks.
lmao, no I don't think so ^^.
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Fri May 11, 2007 5:31 pm |
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Aw, why not?
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Quote of the day: "Evolution has ZERO evidence, otherwise I would have found it by now."
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You are Stern the Destructor (星光の殲滅者): Polite, calm and logical...
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Fri May 11, 2007 5:35 pm |
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Because I have other things I wanna be .
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