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Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:46 am |
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A new poem
Its not too good but I had some emotions that I needed to get out before I snapped.
She cries out in pain
Straining at the ropes
I almost feel bad for her
...almost
Laughter rings out
A torment all its own
Sweet and lilting
yet at the same time dark
Her gaze turns towards me asking
nay... pleading for freedom
I smirk and step forward
Her face falls in realization
A lone tear runs down her face
The laughter starts again
but is quickly drowned out by her screams
Like I said its quite terrible but I don't really mind
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Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:50 pm |
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No, no! It is brilliant!
It might be a little dark, but it is brilliant none the less!
Very good! Very, very good!
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Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:23 pm |
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 awww thanks endy
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Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:43 pm |
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I never have a problem speaking the truth, so no problem, Tifa. ^_^
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