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Kitten Love
WARNING: This story has been edited to include alternate names. In hindsight, this story is probably my crappiest one. It moves too quickly, is unrealistic, and is a poor example of romance. So, anyway, read and post a comment if you wish.
Chapter 1
People say the first day at a new school is hard and Gabriel knew that all too well. This time though, he was here to stay. No more moving and he can finally make friends.
He was driving to school, trying to stay calm, but was nervous and almost going crazy. This happened every time. He got nervous of what would happen. His whiskers twitched occasionally as he thought, his ears back. He hoped no one would think he was a freak for being a cat anthro. He liked being a cat. His soft fur kept him warm, retractable claws were always a plus, and his speed and agility were unmatched.
With this final thought he pulled into the space and got out of his beat up car, his tail swishing slowly from side to side. None of the other cars were much better than his piece of crap. He hoped he would at least be in the budget range of the other students. Popping a piece of beef jerky into his mouth, gnawing nervously, he walked to the front desk and got his schedule and supplies. He was completely lost in the school. He had absolutely no idea where to go and it was etched into his face.
A girl saw his utterly lost look and walked over. She was a fluffy white cat anthro contrasting with his fluffy black fur. She smiled and Gabriel's jaw almost dropped. Keep it together, don't be a fool. He told himself. Don't be a fool and screw up. She was absolutely gorgeous. More beautiful than anything he has seen or imagined. She kept smiling. "You are new huh? I'm Luminia. Could I see your schedule?"
He handed her the schedule with shaking paws and tried to resist the urge to ask her out. He barely knew her and besides, why would she even want to go out with him? She looked at him and giggled when she noticed him staring. She saw something in his eyes that made her feel wanted. She also saw that his eyes were full of love and were beautiful, along with the rest of him. She hoped he would ask her out because she wanted to be his. Gabriel noticed her looking at him and looked at the ground. "Sorry about staring. I'm Gabriel." She smiled and got a little closer. "No one has looked at me that way. No one has noticed me but you. I liked it." She thought. Actually I loved it and I think I love him but why would he choose me?
Gabriel smiled at her. He saw it in her eyes. She wanted him. He was loved. "So, you know where my classes are?" Luminia grinned and nodded. "Yeah! We have the same classes!" Gabriel smiled and nodded. "Ok, let's go to class." She smiled and thought. Maybe I should try. She gently took his paw in hers. Gabriel beamed. "Do you?" She got closer and nodded. "I want to be yours." He hugged her a bit nervously. "I want to be yours too." Luminia gently pressed close to his warmth and love. "I...I think I'm completely in love with you." He gently kissed her cheek. "I feel exactly the same way." They stayed like that for what seemed like an eternity, just drinking in each other's beauty and love. Their eyes, his cool gray, hers blue with a gray swirl, never leaving each other.
Finally the moment ended and they reluctantly went to class. They sat together, his arm around her waist the whole time, Luminia loving every moment. Gabriel couldn't pay attention to anything but her. She meant everything to him.
At the end of the day, he walked out with her, arm in arm. He led her slowly to his car. She leaned against the door, her tail gently swishing side to side and she was purring softly. Gabriel gently pressed close and stroked her cheek lovingly. She couldn't restrain herself anymore and pulled him into a kiss.
Time seemed to stop around them. Gabriel became acutely aware of every detail. The feel of her soft, warm lips against his, her warm body against his, the sweet, intoxicating scent of her wafting into him, and the taste of her beautiful lips. He knew it then. He would always be at her mercy. He would do anything she wanted and would do it happily. She had him at first sight and for all eternity. He beamed wide when they parted lips. "Everything about you is perfect and gorgeous." Luminia shifted, a bit embarrassed. "You...you really think so?" He nodded and softly and tenderly kissed her forehead. Luminia's mind spun, she felt herself falling and then a warm, loving embrace just before it went blank and she fainted.
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~Official E-daddy of Kari~
^Thanks Vanya.
^Thanks again Vanya |
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Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:55 pm |
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Guess I'll add the second chapter too
Chapter 2 (Part 1)
She was warm. Not uncomfortably so, but her fur and body were warm. Luminia slowly opened her eyes to find Gabriel kneeling next to her, cradling her against him, worry and concern etched into his face. She curled up and snuggled into him. "I'm fine honey." Gabriel sighed with relief and kept cradling her. "Why did you faint?" Luminia shrugged. "Guess I just was shocked you wanted me that much." He smiled and gently put her in the passenger side. "I'll take you home. You up for going out tonight?" She nodded and got ready for the drive.
Gabriel got in and started his car, starting to drive. Luminia gave him directions to her house and he parked on the street. He smiled. "I'll pick you up about six." She nodded and slowly walked up to her door, not wanting to leave him. She reluctantly went into her house and up to her room. She heard Gabriel drive away just as she laid down. Luminia sighed. "Well, you found him, but now you just gotta find out how to stay near him forever."
As he was driving home, Gabriel already felt his heart, soul, and body aching for Luminia. He couldn't handle it without her for long. He started thinking of ways for them to be together forever. They ranged from leaving the town with her to living together. He smiled and nodded. "That is the one. My parents want me to experience life outside home and would pay my rent until I am out of college. We could live together." He got home and grabbed a quick bite to eat and rested, planning everything and making calls.
Luminia looked at the clock and smiled. She got herself ready and walked out just as he pulled up. She was in a purple dress. It was cut just under her knees and was fitted well. It wasn't tight, nor was it loose. She walked towards his car and Gabriel got out to meet her. He was wearing a simple red polo and khaki shorts. He smiled and hugged her then gave her a soft and quick kiss. He opened the door for her, Luminia happily getting in, excited for their date. Gabriel got in his side and looked at her, his eyes almost like two luminous orbs.
She smiled. "What is that look for? Was has your beautiful mind cooked up?" He chuckled. "I have an idea. I'll tell you after our date." Luminia smiled, her eyes like his. "Where are we going?" Gabriel chuckled again and started driving. "Oh, you'll see my darling." He drove them to a great Italian restaurant and parked, getting out and walking to her side. He opened her door and held out his paw. Luminia took it and he led her inside.
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Chapter 2 (Part 2)
The restaurant itself wasn't extravagant, yet it was elegant. They were neither over or under dressed. As the waiter led them to their tables, the smell of delicious food wafted to them through the open kitchen. The floor was carpeted with royal blue carpet and the walls were gold trimmed maroon. The trim waved and flowed elegantly, only adding to the beauty. The tables, made of stained oak, were carved with intricate patterns. The waiter seated them and handed them menus, telling them their specials.
Gabriel smiled. "I'd like the lobster ravioli with a side of calamari. If possible, please include sardine sauce with the calamari." The waiter smiled. "Same as usual Gabriel." Luminia grimaced. "Ewwwwwwwwwww! Calamari!" Gabriel smiled. "Never said you had to eat it. Go ahead and get what you want honey." She thought, looking at the menu. Everything looked so delicious! She finally decided on a simple thing. She ordered chicken parmesan. The waiter smiled. "Anything to drink?" As usual, Gabriel ordered a Mountain Dew. Luminia asked for a Pepsi. The waiter left to give their orders to the cook. He came back and gave them glasses of water while their food cooked.
Luminia smiled nervously. "I didn't want you to spend too much." Gabriel chuckled. "Actually it is quite reasonable. I chose here for the elegance and how delicious the food is rather than the cost." She reached out and took his hand in hers, wrapping her tail around his calf. He smiled and, with his longer tail, wrapped it around her waist. Luminia gently petted his tail with her free hand and beamed at him. "I love your fur. It is so soft, fluffy, and pretty." He smiled. "Yours is really fluffy, soft, and beautiful." He gently pulled her tail into his lap and petted it. "Honey, I have an idea to let us be with each other forever." Luminia smiled. "You can't already want to marry me, can you?" He smiled. "Well, when you want to yes, but I was thinking more along the lines of living together."
Luminia looked at him dumbfounded. "You really want to live with me? But where would we live?" He smiled more. "I have some options we can look into that are in the price range I have." She laughed and looked at him. "Well, you certainly thought this through! Ok, let's look at them." Gabriel chuckled. Her enthusiasm was great but they couldn't just go and look at the apartments right away. "Honey, we can't right now but tomorrow we can. I set up the visits for tomorrow in the morning." Luminia perked up a bit at that and the rest of the night was uneventful. They finished their meals and Gabriel took her home. Tomorrow the work began.
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