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 User is Offline roszondas3   Post Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:50 pm
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begining to my auto biography

Life, it is really a mystery as to why there are so many different ideas as to what life means. To some, it is a chance to redeem yourself, to others, it is a chance to gain power. I am one who does not care for the luxuries in life, i just let life go by, as i see that there is really no reason to care, my name is Silver, and this is my story, i was born in 1991 I am, at this time, 19 years old, i am an intellectual, i am a philosopher, i believe what i want to believe, and not what others want me to believe, i have chosen this path, and i will stick to it. I was born in wisconsin, and was adopted by my current mother, Linda, my biological mother did many things wrong while i was in the womb, she smoked pot, and drank, and didn't really care what happened, i believe that part may have rubbed off on me, the part of not caring. anyways, i was born a small, weak, troubled child, at 1st grade, i was diagnosed with major depression, and ADHD, i wish sometimes because of that, that i was never born, but, i can't really stop myself from being born, so, i do not try to. i still to this day feel very angry about this. as i grew older, i got stronger physically and mentally as per usual with most humans, i was raised under my mother and father, not my real parents mind you, but, they were fine, eventually, my parents decided they wanted another child, so, they adopted my sister, who was named Madelyn, she was quite troubled as well. so, we were a happy family, until, my dad decided to cheat on my mother, as he had thought that my mom was cheating on him. going back to 2nd grade, i had met my best friend i have ever, and will ever meet, Lance, he was a great guy, quite possibly the closest you could ever get to the most pure, perfect person ever, he had no issues, no mental issues, nothing, he was a middle-class person, many friends, and the such, mainly females, as he believed in feminist ideas, he taught me alot of things, the reason why i should be nice to girls, and how to be a better person, he was awesome, the best human ever,


A single life. A single death.

the only good man. is a laughing man. Very Happy

my anime list :3 no lifing anime is hard work arigato gozaimas.
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 User is Offline sarahsmaldon   Post Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:56 am
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thats ok mate a tad on the long side for me I only realy like short poems and storys.

good skills tho and some of that stuff you mentioned ie [ smoked pot ] Did not want to mentioned on these fourms seeing as some under 16's play it, and I would personally consider that as not being somethign a under 16 would want to hear.
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 User is Offline Lord J   Post Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:56 pm
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Old fashioned thinking there, Sarah. It's probably not suitable for people under 11, but ones over that age already know all about drugs and such things.

As for the auto-biography:
    Needs to be split into paragraphs.
    Needs more complete sentences. There's so many places where you've put in commas where there should be full stops making them into ridiculously long sentences.





"I don't think you're supposed to smoke during class."
"This isn't a cigarette. It's just a lollipop."
"Lollipops don't make any smoke."
"No, that's just 'cause it's so lollied."

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Like Robin Williams once said.."I haven't seen LJ around in awhile....WTF IS HE PLANNING?"
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