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Sat May 09, 2009 2:03 pm |
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times a wasting.
EDIT: this is just a rough draft..trying to work out the lyrical tempo or what ever you call it, lol
These thoughts inside, i try to hide
but it just seems useless anymore
the more i try, the more i die
until the hurt consumes me even more.
slowly i rise
from the darkest depths inside
show me the light
and somehow make it all right...
you took the chance, you played the game
and now i just don't feel the same
we laughed and we cried
guess i just never realized
that its all i ever wanted...
show me the light and lead me out of my head
give me a sign and take the time to make amends
till its all good again
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Mon Jun 01, 2009 9:40 am |
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I got one called 'Fallen Light' I think you'd like, unfortunately my girlfriend has the only copy. I'll have to get it from her and post it up on here.
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Sun Jun 07, 2009 6:59 am |
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So did you work out the "lyrical tempo"? lol
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Sun Jun 07, 2009 4:12 pm |
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no.. sadly i've not picked up the guitar in a few weeks. i need to work on adding another verse, and trying to figure out which chord pattern works best.
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Tue Dec 29, 2009 1:04 pm |
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I'd like to help.
But looking at your avatar, you want to make a rock song, right?
or megarock or something like that...
I could help you with that, cuz I play the guitar.
But when we make the song a little more bright, we could add a harmonica(me) and then I could help ya...pm me if ya like the idea
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Adding the harmonica does sound great, althought, the lyrics seem a bit to dark for adding a brighter instrument, but it could make a nice musical contrast, i say try it both was first, then decide.
and it seems top me like it would fit with minors and minors sevenths or some of the sort, and maybe throw in a few majors, or something like that.
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