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Thu Dec 10, 2009 7:38 am |
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Poems...
I wrote these last night so i'm gonna put 'em up here
Time God
You screwed me up.
Time god,
So now i must get even
Hurry up now,
pull out your long silver rod,
I am ready to get beaten.
Don't take your time,
I'm no longer your bait,
and to prove it i committed Treason.
Oh dear time god,
Won't you help?
House wins
I follow
never swallow
and for that i
can never be forgiven
the room spins
double zero
House wins
yet your still my hero
It started the train
It rand ten miles
then it fell into the rain
and we all had smiles
Leaves flying,
one way then the other,
dreams were crying,
making the streets shudder.
so what do you guys think?
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Thu Dec 10, 2009 7:41 am |
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~teh pinata stands up and gives it a standing ovation~
Awesome, simply amazing. Wonderfully captivating. ^_^
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Thu Dec 10, 2009 7:47 am |
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yay! Thx!
althought i always think the total opposite...
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Thu Dec 10, 2009 7:54 am |
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I really like them too!
good job =D
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Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:28 pm |
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Thx 
My fav out of those 2 have to be House wins tho... if you understood my mind you would know why. most of the time when i right,
i can mention the sky and mean my cats... but usually it would mean something more like my feelings or my state of mind.
Here is another one i wrote... I don't like this one.
All over stained ground
Our covers make a sound
Flying has no warranty
and ending never have a guaranty
failed flights may hurt
but don't worry, the ground is made of dirt
Flames rise high
tides swing by
lightning strikes
it is something everybody likes
Now i fall
I hit my head
Should i give you a call
Before i hit my bed?
The sky turned red,
stained by my blood,
when my wrists bled,
So if you cry, the world will flood.
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Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:31 pm |
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Nice poem. The wrists part was really scary for me though.
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Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:50 pm |
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The wrists part is something of my past...
The sun rises over dismal weather
he grabs his knife and cuts my leather
the waterfall rises
and the wind drowns
everything is gone
everything lasts long
my life, everyone despises
yet, i'm the only one who carried a frown
Light can hurt
Dark can heal
everyone doesn't care
and everyone doesn't blame
everyone can't hide fore ever
time will get them
but in the meantime
I shall feel gone and out
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 4:22 am |
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You know, I really dislike poems with a kind of figure of death revolving around it, But IMHO i really like these.
Trust me.
The Krad does not lie XD
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 12:15 pm |
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what does IMHO mean?
oh and thank you.
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 12:27 pm |
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In my honest opinion XD
and IMO means in my opinion.
Same difference but just in case you see that one too XD
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| Note to all: HAHAHA i am in love with edam. He and i shall be wed on the next moon of flareys de-pantsing. |
| slayker wrote: |
| oh and by crush, if it's more then a crush ( Like egam and DP) it still counts.... (to me them two are... in hardcore love) |
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 12:58 pm |
Golden Chocobo
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oh okay Thx
oh and i find these 2 lines very, very, sarcastic to
everyone doesn't care
and everyone doesn't blame
BTW that last one, I wrote without thinking i just wanted to write and wrote it, and now i i re-read it, I noticed how sarcastic those lines are.
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