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Wed Feb 27, 2008 9:16 pm |
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Plz read my poem and tell me if i should change anything...
Don't belong
sick of crying,
tired of trying,
yeah you may see me smiling,
but inside i've been dieing,
i'm sick of living sick of life,
get me out of this miserable life,
for i Don't want to live,
i just want to die,
i Don't belong,
i am no use,
no one can help,
I'm to far gone,
i can start to feel the warmth,
of hell,
where i've been told i belong,
i'm scared and i think its all wrong,
i want to be here but not like this i want to be happy,
with out ever feeling like this,
is that to much to ask,
or should i just be done,
done with life,
done with every thing,
so i say good bye to all who know me,
ill see when you die,
hopefully!
End it all
Shed this world and bleed the sky
Let this whole world burn and die
End this world with a great pain
End this all with an acid rain
Forget all of the pain
Forget all of the sorrow
There will be no tomorrow
End it all; end all of the pain and agony
The suffering’ everything breaking me
Everything inside emotionally shaking me
End it all; end it all now it is tearing me
I am coming undone it is all wearing me
I am getting older and I am wearing out
I am getting colder I am drenched in doubt
Weigh the world on my shoulders, die without
Without knowing what is ahead and in store for me
With doubt showing I am dead to the core… sorry
Torn apart
i have no idea what to say,
should i call out,
as you turn away,
do you care that you hurt me this way.
i'm torn apart,
broken inside,
you snapped my string,
not once but twice.
so there you go,
leave again,
and take my heart,
its broken anyway.
Blade
I feel the blade laying on my chest,
Slicing deeper into my breasts.
Crimson water running down,
Crimson water all around.
Bloody carpet,
bloody wall,
bloody body,
ill end it all.
Killing me,
will happen soon,
ill kill myself with a blade of doom.
One short day
one short day to end them all,
one short day to make them fall,
chop them up and make them crawl,
Kill them all and take the pain,
Kill them all to make crimson rain,
chop them up, the will be slain,
one short day to end them all,
one short day to make them fall.
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Thu Mar 13, 2008 1:14 pm |
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...um...the bright colours kinda ruins parts of the mood...
...Great poems though!
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Fri May 02, 2008 8:57 pm |
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i changed the color
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Sat May 03, 2008 9:21 am |
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woah is there anything you wanna talk to us about lumer (jk) great poems though
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Sat May 03, 2008 9:47 am |
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go to life advice...already talked about it...lol
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Awesome poems! I like dark poetry and songs! lol
I wouldn't change a thing about them if i were you. lol
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thanx Alucard_Dracul
do you write poetry?
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Fri May 09, 2008 8:42 pm |
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Yeah, sorta I call them songs eventually I'm gonna write them to sound more like songs. lol
I also play guitar, and people say my singing voice sounds like metalicas singer.
So eventually I might try starting a band. =P lol
By the way if you want to read my songs, their in a topic called awesome songs I wrote.
Or if you want I'll just pm you the songs. lol
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the songs are pretty good.
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Sat May 24, 2008 8:16 am |
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my new poems....there gone.....NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Sat May 24, 2008 9:46 am |
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pls dont stress and dont DP....simply post them again
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Sat May 24, 2008 12:14 pm |
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i never wrote them down...i was planning on doing it the day the site went down
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2 new poems
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