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Sat May 03, 2008 9:25 am |
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I have a couple poems
I've been thinking about publishing them so I want your opinions
Humans
Human beings those cruel machines
All they do is start wars
They lie
They cheat
And they steal
They are truly selfish creatures only capable of violence
Vile and disgusting
They don’t deserve the life they’ve been given
Or the earth on which they reside
Only contempt do I have for them
Only hatred do they invoke in me
Reckless
Spiteful
They act on impulse
And long only for pleasures which they cannot have
Once the proud children of mother earth
Now evil and twisted
Oh sad turn of fate
That has put this world in such a state
Maybe in time they’ll learn
Yet I fear by then it may be too late
I am
I am the one you look up to
And the one you look down upon
I am the friend at your side
And the enemy behind
I am the happiness you show
And the sadness you don’t
I’m the scars that won’t heal
And the pain that won’t fade
I am the earth that you stand on
And the air that you breathe
I’m the water you drink
And the food that you eat
I am the light that you worship
And the darkness you fear
I am the life that you live
And the death that hangs near
I am all of these things
Yet I am none of them
I am you
And you are me
So what do you think should I publish them
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Sat May 03, 2008 9:48 am |
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you should publish them/
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Sat May 03, 2008 10:19 am |
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Thanks Lumer
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Sat May 03, 2008 3:54 pm |
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once again lumer is my bro...im lumer 1 or jenna.
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Sat May 03, 2008 5:16 pm |
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okay okay I'll call you jenna
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Sat May 03, 2008 8:10 pm |
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thank you
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Sat May 03, 2008 8:20 pm |
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No problem 
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Sat May 03, 2008 8:42 pm |
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so do you like to write poetry a lot?
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Sun May 04, 2008 4:31 pm |
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Somewhat I mean all of my poems are written when I'm about ready to snap they're usually dark and angry which is the main reason I've calmed down so much.
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Sun May 04, 2008 5:50 pm |
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thats sounds about the same time when i write poetry.
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Tue May 06, 2008 9:06 pm |
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Seems that way for everyone I know
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Thu May 08, 2008 9:05 pm |
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well if every1 you know does that...im not going to anymore b/c im not like every1.
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Fri May 09, 2008 6:03 am |
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I agree with lumer1 those are awesome poems!
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Sun May 11, 2008 8:14 pm |
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some1 finally agrees with me....yeah.
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