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Project Dark angel -

even though this is the first chapter, what do you think of it !!
it sucked!!
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its not that bad, but not good either
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its good ! i want to see more of it !!!
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Project Dark angel

Project dark angel

Chapter 1 – Crimson idiot and a pinch in the rear.



It was snowing outside and the white snowflakes fell against the bright coloured pieces of glass that formed one inside the temple.
I was sitting behind it , on the 1 meter wide window-sill, looking outside.
It was something I always did ever since "he" had left 6 months ago.
He wanted to find his true identity, what he was for real, why he was being followed by all these demons and spirits...
I think he did found the answers… I really hope so…
But, I want him to come back. Its so boring here without the fights between him and his red haired twin brother about who gets which girl(!), and the stupid jokes he made to make us laugh when Ivy and I were both very sick…
‘Its just way to quiet nowadays…’ I said out loud, followed by a sigh. ‘And way too cold…. I’m freezing….’

‘You’re freezing eh’ a voice said far below me. It startled me and my pen fell down, on top of Myron’s head. ‘Oh! I’m so sorry! Did you hurt anything ?’ I quickly asked, seeing how Myron rubbed his head at the place the pen had fallen on. ‘I’m alright… , how about you ? you’re shivering all over’. ‘Of course I’m shivering ! its * cold in this bloody temple!’ I said , my mood changing rather quickly.
The one below me grinned. “Should I come up there and keep you warm ?”
‘What do you think …fiery *…’ I said, glaring at him. ‘You’ve got Ivy, don’t you?’
Myron scratched his head and had a cheesy grin on his face.
‘ I‘m sorry , that just slipped out of my mouth, I think "he" would’ve asked that too…
Well , I’ll be leaving then! Seeya!’

I sighed a last time. ‘Yeah .. seeya …’( *…you are not your brother!...)
He left the hall soon after , and finally, I was alone again.
The gently falling snow outside turned into a heavy blizzard, and I decided to get one of my sweaters out of my closet so I wouldn’t freeze to death.

I climbed down the ladder and followed the same path Myron did to get to the bedrooms.
As soon as I reached my own, in the meantime having greeted some of the other orphans and priestesses that lived in the temple, already having my fingers around the doorknob, I heard a shriek , coming from Ivy’s . ‘Damnit ! what's Myron’s big idea today ! * moron ! I’ll kill you this time !’ I thought, running towards the girl’s room. Still thinking that her shrieking was Myron’s doing.
Bad mental images went through my mind, followed by a freezing skin.

I kicked it open with all my might and found Ivy still in her bed. Her eyes wide open and trembling as if it was the end of the world.
As soon as she saw me , she pointed to the blood stain sticking against the window.
‘Something smashed against the window all of a sudden!’
‘As if a bird smashed against it…. How gross ‘ I said, getting nauseous just by seeing it.
‘What the hell happened !’ I heard Myron saying from behind me, and then gave me a pinch in my butt. Instinctively , I turned around and smashed my fist into his stomach. ‘What the hell was that for you idiot ! don’t grab my butt ! next time I’ll kill ya !’
I think it was a bit harder then I expected it to be , as he leaned forward, grasping for some air.

‘Varuna ! why did you hit him!’ Ivy yelled at me. ‘He didn’t do anything wrong did he ! ‘
‘Ivy ! he pinched my rear ! what would you do!’ I said back , rubbing my knuckles in the meantime.
Anyways .. I’m going outside, I’ll go and look what it was….

‘Varuna ! you cant leave him like this!’

I glared at the red haired boy on the ground. ‘Believe me , I can….’
and i slammed the door behind me.
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(Myron: @.@ ouch…)
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Chapter one’s done !
Now for the next crappy chapter … -.-‘
( btw , the main character is varuna.. i'll put up some pics pretty soon

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