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 User is Offline kometkat08   Post Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 3:08 am
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Rate My Poem Please

<a href="http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=8383376"> Rate my poem, Go here </a>
and tell others
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 User is Offline azrin   Post Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:10 am
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thats quite good
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 User is Offline Rembrant Heart   Post Posted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 8:30 pm
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I liked.

My only problem with it was that a few of the lines were left hanging and confused me, in particular the line that said something like

Remember the girl to tried to own.

That's not a direct quote, but it said something like that and left me wonderin what it was she was trying to own...not a biggie, just...left very open.

I liked it though. Content was universally relateable...it was cool
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 User is Offline kometkat08   Post Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 10:32 pm
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thanks glad you liked it.
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