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 User is Offline Trooper   PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:28 pm
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The Guilded Age

And MossBack, the youngest of the Rabbitkin, spoke, "Where must I place my trust, if I cannot place my trust with you".
and the solemn father replied, "If we must speak of trust, honor shall also be questioned, and in honor we must hold dear the wishes of our fathers. For without either we are just as heathen as the men who destroy that which we both hold dear."

"But what of our children's children? Must we cast there fate with ours?" young Mossback retorted," Must they fight the battles of their fathers?"

"We must,"said father Ipcus" For it will be all for not if we lay idly by and let them pillage our lands. Men have encroached on our lands for too long. Do you see a future for your young? how will there be children of children if we perish?

"But what of the Stonard, will they come?.
"They must...I shall call the gathering.." and with a tear streaking down his face, Mossback uttered, " Then let it begin..." Wasting no time Father Ipcus ran out into the courtyard towards the humble tower standing above the morning dew. Reaching the top, the good father rang out the call of the Rabbitkin, shouting," No more will my kind be hunted for a bounty! No more!"

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here goes: I like it, but my guess as to why there hasnt been a responce before this (besides the fact that barely anyone reads this subcategory) is prolly because of your writing style in there. Personally i like it, and more importantly, in the grand scheme of writing, it helps your writing stand out. so i say keep going at it, buuuuut dont push it. only write when you really feel like it.

when i try and push myself to write, it just comes out as crap. that might not be you though so go to town. ^^

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