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Tue Aug 07, 2007 7:45 pm |
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my lithium poem
In chains for you my love,
the battle within me.
Against a night sky,
drown my will to fly,
lithium.
(it's short i know but i thought it sounded good as is.)
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Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:52 pm |
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Yeah that is good i like it...
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Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:54 pm |
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why thank you, i am flattered.
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you should be your poems are amazing i love them
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Wed Aug 08, 2007 1:22 am |
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But your poetry is beautiful as always. I don't think you'll ever make a piece that isn't beautiful.
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Wed Aug 08, 2007 11:37 am |
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*blush* wow you guys really think so. I am so flattered my cheaks are red.^^
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Of course we think so if we didnt we wouldnt praise you so.
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*giggles* well i just do my best.
here is a new one....
In the silence
I hear your voice,
it calls to me
leaving me no choice,
but to follow.
Softly whimpering,
I fall under your spell
as you take me down
into the pits of hell
beyond the dark hollow.
Kiss me demon,
creature of the night.
Make me scream,
cuz I won't fight,
tonight my grave is shallow.
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 1:20 am |
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Woah thats sorta dark... but it still has that beauty to it. How do you do it?
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 12:06 pm |
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haha tbh.
I right based on my life, and what's going on in it, or how i am feeling at the time. My life has always been difficult, so i have alot of inspiration.
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:25 pm |
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Well i bet i know whos poems that is about 
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 4:10 pm |
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haha if you think it's about someone other than me, you're wrong. It's about me and my own internal demons, and how they are a part of me and sometimes get the best of me.
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yeah its nice how you write about your everyday personal life. I do the same thing. And the theme was sorta obvious tio me no offense if it wasnt supposed to be that way.
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Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:34 pm |
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no it is good that you noticed what it was about, i was just pointing it out to smile.
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