Anime Artwork- For My Developing Anime: the Unadorned Prince

So thanks to my mother, I ended up returning to doing artwork in Flash, and I made this nice picture of an anime teenager:



It gave me an idea, and I realized that I wanted to make an anime involving him, so I started to develop a story, and character bios as well. I wanted to get people's opinions on both the story, and the characters. I'll be doing more artwork, but since this one took me 6 hours, I'm not sure when the others will be coming just yet.

Anyways, so about my anime...

Storyline:
The lonely prince Caleb, perceived as a normal, yet seemingly cold highschool student, finds himself caught up in a love mess. Trying to secretly grasp a new freshman named Rhianna Lintry's heart, the youth finds a seething rage building up inside of him as his brother Caden begins dating her.

Attempting to suppress his misguided, dark thoughts, Caleb continues to ignore his brother's persistance of his feelings. Finding himself replaced at Caden's side by the ignorant, selfish Liam, Caleb is brought to a new, mysterious version of himself.

Enraged by the happenings around him, Caleb struggles with his narcolepsy (a condition that causes the person to go into seizures, and then fall into a deep sleep, sometimes for days), that lead him into visions of his disturbing, surreal self. Confronted by a conniving man, Caleb is misguided in how to react towards everything around him, and as his doppleganger starts to slip through, the prince finds himself without friends, and without a hope to wake.

So that's the basics of it so far, and I don't want to reveal too much info , but what do people think?

Check the next post for character profiles.