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My final fantasy Poem
Yuna is so beautyful
Laguna is so Tough
Yuna is so kind
Laguna is so mean
Yuna is so cheerful
Laguna is so cold
Auron is so brute
Selphie is so cute
Auron is so cold
Selphie is so bold
Auron is so Hateful
Selphie is so Trustful
Ok im gunna stop cause this is starting to sound gay
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i feel honoured XD
so , ill give it a 4 cause its kinda short 
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thanks i guess
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Here's a 2 for effort ><
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I'll give it a three. A little simple but nice
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Laguna being mean? Auron hatefull? Not good...
But I'll give it three because it's great anyway!  Could be longer though...
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Uh, never thought of mixing final fantasy and poetry before...
Well, I give it a 2 for the effort, but laguna cold and mean? Auron hateful(I agree with the cold part)?
You kinda changed them there. Laguna opens up to anyone and is cheerful in the game, and Auron doesn't hate too much.
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Excactly what I thought....
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eh little repetitive i would say about a C in letter grading
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hm...this is tough. i like the idea but if it's longer and a powerful use of words, it could be something. i give a 3. 6_6
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interesting....^^
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