| Lander's Revenge-A Story
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Wed Sep 14, 2005 6:50 pm |
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Valent sat down on Henta's bed and stared looking at her sleep. Her pale white skin seemed to glow brightly as her breathe passed her red lips. Her innocence seemed to rival an angel's as she slowly opened her eyes. "Valent?" Henta asked opening her eyes. "Yes, Henta?!" Valent said being pulled out of his trance. "Oh...Valent, Why is it so dark?" Henta asked sitting up, her pale white eyes peering in the distance. Valent ,shocked, just sat their in disbelief. "Valent?! Are you still there! I don't want to be alone anymore in the darkness. I need you to help me. I need to tell you.." Henta began her eyes overflowing with a outburst of tears. Wordlessly Valent embraced Henta in his arms, her hot tears falling onto his shoulder.
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Valent coaxed her as she wept. Henta then pushed him away "I need to tell you something Valent." Henta said seemingly looking right past him. "Valent, I know of what is to come and what I must do. This war is much more than either you or I have expected." Valent sat their astounded at what he was hearing. Henta went on to tell him that the stone Frunt had given her was an ancient stone from her Great Grandmother Nanul. She told him that it was a shattered piece of the Ancient Orenda's Moonstone. "Grandmother Nanul...." Valent looked at her and let out a small whimper. "Lady Nanul...she is dead Henta." Valent said remembering that of what happened at his home. "I have known." Henta said "My father, Frunt, told me when you arrived. Now I must finish my story!" A crash came from down the stairs as a man with dark black hair barged into their room wielding a longbow. "Help me!" He pleaded as he slammed the door shut, making sure to lock it.
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Wed Sep 14, 2005 7:14 pm |
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"Please! You must help me!" The young man quickly said as footsteps were heard barging up the stairs. "I need you to help me get out of this town! They will kill me if you do not!" Valent and Henta stood bewildered as the man pleaded with them.
Now, Shall Henta and Valent help him escape, or hand him in to the tavern folk?
1- Help Him!!!
2- Let him Suffer.
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Wed Sep 14, 2005 7:18 pm |
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Help him escape of course!
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Thu Sep 15, 2005 12:50 am |
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I'll go with #2: let him suffer. I want to see a glimpse of darkness in Valent's eyes after all that he's been through.
Something along the lines of "Where were you when I needed the help?! Where were you when I lost lady Nanul?!"
and trigger the Cerebrus inside Henta by Henta trying to calm Valent only to be stopped by the Cerebrus' instinct inside of her.
Doesn't have to be this way though. Just wanted the story to show it's first glimpse of darkness in it.
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Thu Sep 15, 2005 5:19 am |
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Ok! Nice suggestions by the way, dont worry I will think of something.... 
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*chants help him in the backround*
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(Sorry boqqtzz)
"Get out!!" Yelled Henta, a inner demon seemingly controlling her. Valent then suddenly felt a threat of this man and unlocked the door. "You have done wrong and you shall pay for what crime you have committed." Valent said as the door to their room slammed open and the angry tavern folk barged in. "You evil creature!" Yelled out the townsfolk "You Demon! You have slaughtered our kin! And for that you will pay." The demon parted his hair and revealed two beady red eyes.
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Fri Sep 16, 2005 5:39 pm |
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Awww thats too bad. They could have befriended the demon or something!
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Fri Sep 16, 2005 5:49 pm |
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Lol, that would be hilarious boqqttzz. How do you say your username anyway?
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 FINALLY SOMEONE ASKS!!!
Well its Boqqtzz=Box.......weird I know but I do weird things when i'm bored.
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Sat Sep 17, 2005 8:05 am |
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Lol
No wonder Haine calls you Boxxy or was it Boqqy?
Where is it based on?
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It's Boqqy of course!
And it just happened to be based on my imagination............lol
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The demon then began to change its form. Its arms began to grow and his nails created long sharp talons. Thes talons were gripped around his longbowand long dark wings began to protrude from his cloak. His eyes flared up as he stabbed Valent deep into his chest. Its long talons went through his body and protruded outward, blood flowing to the ground and covering the black talons.
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Valent was left to lie on the dirty floor as blood poured out of his body. As he laid their unconscious something sparked inside Henta. Inside her a demon grew forcing her to go into a trance. To those around her at the time said she had began to glow a fierce red. Her features became distorted and she began to float in the air. After the red came a blinding white flash. The Draknor shielded his eyes as on his persona came a black light. It wore a amulet that protected it from the stone and it reeled up and attacked her. In one swift move Henta had slashed him with what seemed to be a Kogatana but it had a shadow of a paw. The creature was sliced in two as it began to dissipate into a puff of smoke. Henta then woke from her trance, not knowing what had happened, and saw Valent on the ground now in a pool of his own blood. "Oh my god.." Henta uttered as she sprawled out diving her hands deep into the bloody wound itself.
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