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Mon Jul 17, 2006 11:36 am |
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the plaine landed in front of lara´s house
Alister , Winston and Zip stood in front of the door waithing for lara
fernando opened the door and lara didnt wait for the stairs , she hopped out the plaine and runned to the 3 guys
Zip : See i told you she would survive!
Alister : Lara you made it out? I sure thought you where done for
Winston : Mylady , you are quite surprising
Lara : OK i am back and breathing ….where is father patrick?
Is he inside!?
Zip whispered ´how can she now´ but just a little too hard so lara could hear it
Lara : i have destroyed the istone of the death dont you think i would know now who is living and who isnt?
At any rate i want to see Father Patrick….
The door of the mansion opened , and the was Father Patrick
lara walked to him like a mad beast
Lara : how dare you !
i risked my life to please you for a last time and you where just here in england breathing and all!
Father Patrick : Lara , this was a serious mission and if you knew i was alive you wouldnt give 100% in your mission …so basicly i didnt had a choice
Lara : thats nonsense! I always give 100% in every mission else i would have been dead by now! Guys did you knew of all this!?
Winston : No no one did , he just apeared yesterday …i scared myself to death when i opened the door for him yesterday
Lara : …i admire your wisdom Father please forgive me for my rudeness
Father Patrick : please dont say sorry , i was already expecting a reaction like this
but …the stone is detroyed?
Lara : i hope so , the 2 stones combined and caused a huge explosion
Father Patrick : so we are save for a thousend years , it depends on what stone was stronger this time , the stone that losed will be a meteor over maybe a couple years …and then ..-
Lara : what!? I broke the Philosopher´s stone in pieces , and the Sapphire Stone in even more pieces! 2 pieces combined thats all
Father Patrick : you destroyed them?if you damaged the nside the spell would stop
did…did you killed their leader?
Lara : no a thunder strike killed her …she wanted to touch the sapphire stone and then the thunder apeared and killed her , its a shame cause she was at my side
Father Patrick : no she was just using you , with that stone she could make the wole world doomed like the island ….apparently there was a stronger person in her company …you
Lara : i had fate in her …then how can i be stronger!?
I was even posessed!
Father Patrick : Calm down dear , if you was posessed it also means you where stronger then the one that took over your body cause you are still here
Winston : i dont want to interupt but lets go inside , lara you must be hungry
the guys went inside , lara waited ...
she was thinking about eulalie ...was she a traitor? or just a leader that didnt wanted to be a leader
Father Patric ...he is smart but this ...the world died when she heard he was dead and now ...
Lara : Zip alister!? did you had news about discovered artefacts i want to head out tomorrow morning ...
Zip : Im on it , alister are you coming or what!?
Alister : i..i come with you
lara waited till the guys went up the stairs
lara: Father , you sure are surprising
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The End
i hope you enjoyed reading my story
there is maybe going to be another
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Mon Jul 17, 2006 2:27 pm |
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Wow this story has always amazed me, really love your story!
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Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:44 pm |
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YEA VERY GOOD !
Yuna has true tomb raider spirit inside her.
lady croft herself.
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Tue Jul 18, 2006 4:31 pm |
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the spirit of a computer heroine inside me ...lol that osunds funny , though thanks for the compliments i am on a other story and slowly my english will improve
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Nice story Yuna. Good work!
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Thu Jul 20, 2006 8:01 am |
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the new story is on the net , in the same catorgery as this one ...like always piece by piece ill write it
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